Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Uneasy Bond Cracks

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Drawn, Uneasy, Crumble..


Uneasy Bond Cracks

I pull away as
my dreams crumble one by one;
Uneasy bond cracks;

Uneasy bond cracks;
truth leaks from behind the mask
weaved skillfully

Weaved skillfully
yet the holes bleed malice;
I am no more drawn

I am no more drawn;
dreams lie in a heap hoping
for newer bonds ..


RS:)
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13 comments:

  1. rallentandaAugust 8, 2012 at 4:46 AM

    I have forgotten what this form is called but it is very effective in conveying the troubled message in this verse.Broken dreams and the need for a new start.

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  2. J Cosmo NewberyAugust 8, 2012 at 5:07 AM

    It's odd, the continuity of the recurring lines gives it a broken feel. Yes, new bonds are something to hope for.

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  3. Sheilagh LeeAugust 8, 2012 at 5:17 AM

    Broken dreams need either fixes or new ones woven,

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  4. Karunesh MishraAugust 8, 2012 at 8:21 AM

    but when drams will be turn into reality.

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  5. joanneAugust 8, 2012 at 11:21 AM

    When one dream crumbles, dream up some new ones, but don't forget that hopeful heap...

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  6. VIVEK VK JAINAugust 8, 2012 at 12:07 PM

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  7. Judith WesterfieldAugust 8, 2012 at 3:24 PM

    Ramesh,
    That seems to have welled up from unconscious places. Very poignant and painfully sad.

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  8. Old EggAugust 8, 2012 at 3:49 PM

    The malice bleeding malice through the holes in the weave is a really powerful image that illustrates the hurt felt so brilliantly. No wonder dreams lay in a heap! Vividly expressed.

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  9. flipside recordsAugust 8, 2012 at 9:45 PM

    This is my favorite line: "yet the holes bleed malice"

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  10. Amrit SinhaAugust 9, 2012 at 3:39 AM

    Uneasy bonds crack .... well said !!!

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  11. RMPAugust 9, 2012 at 11:16 AM

    I'm left a bit sad...the idea of dreams laying in a heap...

    I enjoyed the flow and the use of repetition.

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  12. ElleceeAugust 10, 2012 at 4:49 AM

    Such sad thoughts - wonderfully expressed.

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