Written for Haiku Heights..
Thanks to Susan L. Daniels of the blog
for the theme STARS
Shall I Call Them Stars?
Millions of the stars ,
twinkle in my eyes each night;
ah, unseen billions...
Ah, Unseen billions
shine afar beyond skies;
Shall I call them stars?
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And here's an old one... a hiaku that has highest hits on my blog for
the reasons unknown.. 523 page views....for new friends at haiku heights..
Happy Earth invites;
and sliding down a rainbow
joyous stars arrive..
RS:)
Also shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart
Nice stars haiku RS ~
ReplyDeleteStars really shine in your words :-)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely, 'call them stars'....flawless...and the 'popular' haiku - it's 'happy' and 'joyous' - who doesn't like those feelings?!
ReplyDeleteBEAUTIFUL! Loved your title, too. :)
ReplyDeleteThese are wonderful. I can certainly see why the last one has the most hits. I do love it!
ReplyDeleteRamesh you have another STAR in the making.
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Yes!...we miss some stars as they play hide and seek in the sky!....Very beautiful one :)
ReplyDeleteOh am stopping by here after a long time..and you are as usual on fire with your powerful haiku! Loved that rainbow one especially. :)
ReplyDeleteVery deep.
ReplyDeleteAnd your popular Haiku boost celebration mood. I think it will be used in festival seasons and happy occasions profusely.
I like the second one.. nice way to think of falling stars :)
ReplyDeleteI can see those giggling little stars sliding down a rainbow, having the time of their lives!
ReplyDeleteEverywhere the Stars
beautiful.. no wonder the last haiku got so many hits. its simply lovely..
ReplyDeleteFalling Stars