Friday, August 24, 2012

Safe Heaven, Alien Thoughts..



Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..
and Leo's  Haiku Heights..





Safe Heaven, Alien Thoughts


Hit by speed
my world slows down;
morning walk

Morning walk
bright Sun on my face
pulls me strong

Pulls me strong
seeking an embrace;
I refuse

I refuse
and return back home;
safe heaven

***

Safe heaven;
I flap strange wings of
alien thoughts


RS:)

This post is reflecting my mood after getting a minor
 hit from a bike at a crossing as I went for my morning walk today...and
had to return home...by the grace of God and good wishes
of all the friends here I am fine and well...was a trivial accident
just thought of clarifying on the context....




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18 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaAugust 24, 2012 at 2:19 AM

    Lovely words !!!

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  2. Priti LisaAugust 24, 2012 at 6:21 AM

    Thank God it was a minor accident...but it did bring about a lovely haiku♥

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  3. carol l mckennaAugust 24, 2012 at 3:31 PM

    flap strange wings of alien thoughts ~ lovely line closure for excellent haiku ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherAugust 24, 2012 at 4:00 PM

    So glad that you are OK, and had a safe place to return to!

    Tattoo


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  5. LeaAugust 24, 2012 at 8:28 PM

    I too am so glad that you are OK. The play on words and underlying meaning in your haiku is really well done Ramesh.

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  6. Tarun MazumdarAugust 24, 2012 at 11:01 PM

    I am happy that you are safe to compose this piece...

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  7. PranitaAugust 25, 2012 at 12:57 AM

    Relieved that ur fine Ramesh ji! It did bring a good haiku out of you ;) Take care.

    Finding epitome of life!

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  8. AnonymousAugust 25, 2012 at 3:39 AM

    I want to take your morning walk RS.

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  9. joanneAugust 25, 2012 at 7:37 AM

    I, too, find home the safest and most comfortable place...love to travel and explore, but the best part is coming home.....

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  10. vivinfranceAugust 25, 2012 at 12:25 PM

    The shock you suffered colours your haiku.

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  11. Judith WesterfieldAugust 25, 2012 at 3:40 PM

    Oh my gosh Ramesh! I'm so glad you are ok and were able to return home under your own power. Accidents like that truly live up to the definition of "accident" They can also shake up our feelings of safety in the ordinary world.

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  12. SandyCarlsonAugust 25, 2012 at 6:00 PM

    I am sorry that happened, and I hope you are OK. You created a beautiful poem out of that experience.

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  13. Ramesh SoodAugust 25, 2012 at 10:19 PM

    Thanks a lot for the concern all of you have shown..it's your love and God's grace that protected me..and hopefully will encourage me to continue to move forward ...

    I express my gratitude..

    RS:)

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  14. MaritAugust 26, 2012 at 12:49 AM

    Life can turn around in no-time but we don't think about that often do we? Experiences like yours make us realize it again... love the haiku Ramesh!

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  15. NoopurAugust 26, 2012 at 7:54 AM

    It was wonderful to step in here :) you have a great blog....

    http://apparitionofmine.blogspot.in/

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  16. AnonymousAugust 26, 2012 at 5:47 PM

    Glad you escaped injury ... it must have been frightening at the time.
    Parallel Dimensions

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  17. Sanjana August 27, 2012 at 6:16 AM

    each haiku of yours leaves me in awe..its amazing how you can express your thoughts in such simple words n so beautifully..hats off!!! :)

    take good care..n get back to your morning walks soon! :)

    http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/

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  18. ekta khetanAugust 29, 2012 at 6:38 AM

    Brilliant!

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