Saturday, August 11, 2012

Morning Sees Eyes Glow..

For Leo's


Prompt: Soul

Morning Sees Eyes Glow..


Her soul flies at night
to go and meet with the Moon;
Morning sees eyes glow...

Morning sees eyes glow;
a faint Moon waits eagerly
for  the night to fall..


RS:)
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25 comments:

  1. Sankara Jayanth SAugust 11, 2012 at 6:16 AM

    beautiful lines, Rameshji! :)

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  2. PranitaAugust 11, 2012 at 6:25 AM

    So dreamy and mesmerizing!!!! :)

    Soul prefers poor pure note!

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  3. rallentandaAugust 11, 2012 at 6:33 AM

    Oh this is a lovely one.Moon waiting for eagerly for nightfall

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  4. AnonymousAugust 11, 2012 at 6:37 AM

    lovely haiku! :D

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  5. UnknownAugust 11, 2012 at 6:42 AM

    Very nice structure capturing the infinite so succinctly!

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  6. Vaishali JainAugust 11, 2012 at 6:50 AM

    I read it slowly and at the end of it, I was left with a smile. It's beautiful, Ramesh Sir!

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  7. SusanAugust 11, 2012 at 7:45 AM

    Soul, yes, if Sun is soul to this life we watch the drama often enough to see it replay everywhere here and now. I enjoyed sitting with these haiku and riding them too.

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  8. AnonymousAugust 11, 2012 at 7:49 AM

    Beautiful and mesmerizing cycle you created there Ramesh Sir! Delightful read..Thanks :)

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  9. joanneAugust 11, 2012 at 8:00 AM

    Every nite a journey...the moon loves the visits...

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  10. TigerbriteAugust 11, 2012 at 9:15 AM

    Oh I love this. I am best friends with the Moon Goddess:)

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  11. TeresaAugust 11, 2012 at 10:02 AM

    These are both wonderful. I love the idea of that night journey to meet the moon.

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  12. GraceAugust 11, 2012 at 11:46 AM

    Beautiful haiku RS ~

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  13. Amrit SinhaAugust 11, 2012 at 12:03 PM

    Lovely lines :-)

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  14. Sri ValliAugust 12, 2012 at 1:38 AM

    Very dreamy and delightful haiku :)

    Broken Soul

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  15. vivinfranceAugust 12, 2012 at 4:57 AM

    Lovely romantic set.

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  16. PattiKenAugust 12, 2012 at 6:35 PM

    Very romantic, Ramesh.

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  17. Judith WesterfieldAugust 12, 2012 at 7:11 PM

    Love the line "a faint moon waits eagerly" Lovely lovely lovely

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  18. AnonymousAugust 13, 2012 at 5:55 AM

    soulful indeed

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  19. Rosie GanAugust 13, 2012 at 8:15 AM

    I like the thought of reunion in the morn, a touching sentiment.

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  20. odyzzAugust 14, 2012 at 7:20 AM

    beautifully captured....!! amazing..

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  21. Claude Lopez-GinistyAugust 15, 2012 at 12:39 PM

    This is superb Ramesh! Thank you so much!

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  22. Kathy ReedAugust 15, 2012 at 5:29 PM

    I love these!

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  23. RedAugust 17, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    We did didn't we? Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I enjoyed your haiku.

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  24. AnonymousAugust 17, 2012 at 11:27 AM

    Amazing circular haiku - hypnotic I love it

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  25. SuzyAugust 17, 2012 at 10:41 PM

    Loved your haiku. Exciting.

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