Saturday, August 11, 2012

Morning Sees Eyes Glow..

For Leo's


Prompt: Soul

Morning Sees Eyes Glow..


Her soul flies at night
to go and meet with the Moon;
Morning sees eyes glow...

Morning sees eyes glow;
a faint Moon waits eagerly
for  the night to fall..


RS:)

25 comments:

  1. Oh this is a lovely one.Moon waiting for eagerly for nightfall

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  2. lovely haiku! :D

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  3. Very nice structure capturing the infinite so succinctly!

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  4. I read it slowly and at the end of it, I was left with a smile. It's beautiful, Ramesh Sir!

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  5. Soul, yes, if Sun is soul to this life we watch the drama often enough to see it replay everywhere here and now. I enjoyed sitting with these haiku and riding them too.

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  6. Beautiful and mesmerizing cycle you created there Ramesh Sir! Delightful read..Thanks :)

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  7. Every nite a journey...the moon loves the visits...

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  8. Oh I love this. I am best friends with the Moon Goddess:)

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  9. These are both wonderful. I love the idea of that night journey to meet the moon.

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  10. Love the line "a faint moon waits eagerly" Lovely lovely lovely

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  11. I like the thought of reunion in the morn, a touching sentiment.

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  12. beautifully captured....!! amazing..

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  13. This is superb Ramesh! Thank you so much!

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  14. We did didn't we? Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I enjoyed your haiku.

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  15. Amazing circular haiku - hypnotic I love it

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