Friday, May 10, 2013

And Stories All Spill...Haiku

Written for Haiku My Heart Friday 
& Haiku Heigts Saturday
One Single Impression Sunday..
 
 
 
 
Yesterday I was in an early morning flight to Chennai
on a window seat opening towards East..and I knew what awaited me....
 
 
Ah, special morning
as I float above the clouds;
glorious sun-rise
 
glorious sunrise;
rolls of  cotton clouds try to
hold sharper sun-beams
 
Hold sharper sunbeams;
a golden line quietly cuts
heaven from the Earth
 
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Prompt: Story
 
 
And Stories All Spill.. 
 
 
Her bright masked face
does not tell  any stories;
wrinkles hide inside
 
Wrinkles hide inside;
a look at him, cracks apppear
and stories all spill..

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Prompt: Rekindle


Morning Sun
rekindles my spirits;
I go on..

I go on;
life presents pleasant
surprises..


RS:)

23 comments:

  1. Love the true story and great imagery of the cracks appearing on a wrinkled face and the stories spilling!! You never fail to disappoint with your stories in Haiku format!!

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    1. I am sure Nanka, you wanted to say, " You never fail to delight with your stories in Haiku Format.."

      RS..

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  2. So lovely Rameesh. Such simple beauty and truth ... each one a labour of love. Thank you for your wonderful blog.

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  3. Nice take on the various prompts! Refreshing set:)

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  4. An excellent collection, as always.

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  5. Nature is just wonderful, and when a poet sees it, it becomes more wonderful...

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  6. That is amazing set of Haiku...you always spell a magic with your Haiku! :)

    'Wrinkles hide inside;
    a look at him, cracks apppear
    and stories all spill..'

    These are well thought and deep!

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  7. That poem inspired by flight above the earth is indeed heavenly!

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  8. Very forward looking and encouraging words here. a lot of pleasant surprises in store ahead for sure!

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  9. Every Haiku is unique.Enjoyed reading every line.' Life presents pleasant surprises' How true!! simple words full of deep thoughts!!

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  10. beautiful cascading haiku with the essence of the divine ~ Wonderfully penned.

    Thanks for visiting .

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  11. I feel a bit more in peace with my own wrinkles now ;) - wonderful haiku my friend!

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  12. dear ramesh,

    i love this so much..

    a golden line quietly cuts
    heaven from the Earth

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  13. Dear Ramesh,
    I, of course enjoyed all 3 poems,
    particularly the third♥
    I also wanted to thank you so
    very much for your comment on my haiku...
    as you know I hold you and your work in
    such esteem that your words meant that much more to me.

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    1. Thanks Priti.Lisa.. I am sure you know that the feeling expressed by you is mutual...

      RS

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  14. I loved how you portrayed the scenery ... beautifully painted !!!

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  15. "A golden line"
    The heights of poet's imagination and reader's delight!

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  16. You really have this format down, in such few words you create such vivid stories!

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  17. A story of a wonderful phenomenon beautifully told.

    Hazel Anastasia

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  18. I enjoyed your poem immensely Ramesh, especially this line "a golden line quietly cuts heaven from earth." Beautiful verses.

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  19. this is a fresh read Ramesh! makes me alive this sunday :-)

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