HAIKU CHALLENGE
Thanks to SiS @ Few Miles!
Iced thoughts ;
a cube of frozen haiku
a cube of frozen haiku
melts on the paper
Gleaming eyes
gaze at sneezing words ;
hearts spill warmth
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Also written for 3WW
Detach, Jolt, Surge
Day detaches
from the surging night;
Jolted daydreams
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Also written for 3WW
Detach, Jolt, Surge
Day detaches
from the surging night;
Jolted daydreams
RS :)
Your ICED THOUGHTS is perfect - my favorite
ReplyDeletewonderful one Ramesh...reading you after a long time but your pen makes it all fresh..!!
ReplyDeletethank you
Terrific! Love the first one!
ReplyDeleteThe second is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteJolted daydreams. Nicely said. Very succinct and eloquent use of the prompts.
ReplyDeletelovely both of these I love the line hearts spill warmth
ReplyDeleteI love the haiku as a physical existence in itself..melting..as eager eyes read..Jae
ReplyDeleteRameshji,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the challenge.. I am melting after reading your first Haiku.. OMG.. too good.. Loved it..
Someone is Special
Very nice set....like the iced thoughts and sneezing words ~
ReplyDeletePhew, Love the idea of frozen Haiku!!!
ReplyDeleteGood three for 3ww too!!
Iced thoughts and frozen Haiku ... great image ... and I can certainly relate!!!
ReplyDeleteNice series of haiku.
ReplyDeleteThe imagery in the ice cube piece is fabulous.
ReplyDeleteWonderful, especially enjoyed jolted daydreams - 'cause
ReplyDeleteI can't stand when my daydreams are jolted.