Tuesday, January 31, 2012

Haiku Challenge by SiS...& 3WW


HAIKU CHALLENGE



Thanks to SiS  @ Few Miles!



Iced thoughts ;
a cube of frozen haiku
melts on the paper

Gleaming  eyes
gaze at sneezing words ;
hearts spill warmth


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Also written for 3WW
Detach, Jolt, Surge



Day detaches
from the surging night;
Jolted daydreams


RS :)

15 comments:

  1. Your ICED THOUGHTS is perfect - my favorite

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  2. wonderful one Ramesh...reading you after a long time but your pen makes it all fresh..!!

    thank you

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  3. Terrific! Love the first one!

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  4. Jolted daydreams. Nicely said. Very succinct and eloquent use of the prompts.

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  5. lovely both of these I love the line hearts spill warmth

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  6. I love the haiku as a physical existence in itself..melting..as eager eyes read..Jae

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  7. Rameshji,

    Welcome to the challenge.. I am melting after reading your first Haiku.. OMG.. too good.. Loved it..

    Someone is Special

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  8. Very nice set....like the iced thoughts and sneezing words ~

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  9. Phew, Love the idea of frozen Haiku!!!

    Good three for 3ww too!!

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  10. Iced thoughts and frozen Haiku ... great image ... and I can certainly relate!!!

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  11. The imagery in the ice cube piece is fabulous.

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  12. Wonderful, especially enjoyed jolted daydreams - 'cause
    I can't stand when my daydreams are jolted.

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