Written for One Single Impression
Thanks to Dryad of Invincible Summer for
this week's prompt, invincible
Something Inside Me Melts...
In the last pages
of the book of life
Ego is forced
to surrender to
the time…
Impenetrable
finally meets
the invincible…
Ah, this sudden light
makes something
inside me
melt like wax…
Aren't you feeling
the same, here and now..
RS :)
Beautiful. It touches inside.
ReplyDeleteSURRENDER makes the Difference...melting us to soft...tender...pure...
ReplyDeleteVery well written!
I think many of us of a certain age think this. You have expressed it so well.
ReplyDelete"surrender to the time"...well said!
ReplyDeletebeautiful RS...
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Ego is forced to surrender -- ah that it would happen to ALL -- wouldn't this be a beautiful world.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully said!
ReplyDeleteEgo is certainly forced to surrender with time :) Awesome :)
ReplyDeleteLike a 'revelation' coming! :)
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Indeed ego cannot stand against the invincible time. Great piece!
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful poem. You've certainly captured the invincible.
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