Saturday, January 7, 2012

Something Inside Me Melts...


Written for One Single Impression  

Thanks to Dryad of Invincible Summer  for
this week's prompt, invincible


Something Inside Me Melts...
 
In the last pages
of the book of life
Ego is forced
to surrender to
the time…
Impenetrable
finally meets
the invincible…
Ah, this sudden light
makes something
inside me
melt like wax…
Aren't you feeling
the same, here and now..

RS :)

12 comments:

  1. SURRENDER makes the Difference...melting us to soft...tender...pure...

    Very well written!

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  2. I think many of us of a certain age think this. You have expressed it so well.

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  3. "surrender to the time"...well said!

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  4. Ego is forced to surrender -- ah that it would happen to ALL -- wouldn't this be a beautiful world.

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  5. Ego is certainly forced to surrender with time :) Awesome :)

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  6. Like a 'revelation' coming! :)
    ..

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  7. Indeed ego cannot stand against the invincible time. Great piece!

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  8. This is a beautiful poem. You've certainly captured the invincible.

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