Written for Haiku Heights
Thanks to Heaven of Sweet Lust for the prompt.. Page
Also Sharing with Haiku My Heart
Always opens
On the page titled "Today";
Book of my life..
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None wrote on it
so the page stayed spotless;
Empty feelings..
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I tear the page
teary eyed, children smile;
Aha, paper boat!
RS: )
Nice haiku set specially the first one.
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(aka Heaven)
All three are very nice. I especially enjoyed the first two.
ReplyDeleteVery clever interpretations, especially the first.
ReplyDeleteI agree nice set ... I particularly like the first one!!
ReplyDeleteI so loved it, especially because I recently wrote a post about journals and this is so much in sync with it!!
ReplyDeleteHappy 2012 :)
the book of life is never empty, always a different point of view, nice one
ReplyDeleteA lovely trio - my favourite is the last one.
ReplyDeleteThe first one is also my favorite.
ReplyDeleteThe second one, for me is sad.
that was lovely
ReplyDeleteNice series Ramesh, I especially liked the second one. It's so obvious ... an empty page ... I think every poet has days to deal with non inspiration.
ReplyDeleteOn the other side an empty page is also a haiku ... the space around the haiku is also important and when that space is empty it brings balance in the haiku.
The 1st two are stronger, but I love the concept of a paper boat. Salute.
ReplyDeleteEven an 'Empty page' conveys a lot...
ReplyDeleteLovely set of Haiku S,each one on different note!
the last one made me smile! i love paper boats....
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