Saturday, January 14, 2012

Gem of a Haiku..

Written for Haiku Heights..

Gem of a Haiku..

Gems shine
in her precious smile;
she's a treasure..

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Sun rises and
rain bows in colours;
Gem of a haiku

Gem of a haiku;
happy heart accepts
 arrogance of mind.. 

RS :) 

10 comments:

  1. Beautifully done, and I think that last line is essential in the writer.

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  2. Wonderful series. I agree with Anthony that the last line is essential for every writer.

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  3. not arrogance but I think the courage from the heart...nice haiku ~

    have a good weekend ~

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  4. I guess we did, indeed spoke of same thing.
    But why is it arrogance of mind?

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  5. ha, ha, each haiku is a gem

    <a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/01/14/three-senryu-about-gems/>three senryu about gemstones </a>

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  6. While all of these are nice, I really like the first one. A smile really is a gem to brighten the day.

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  7. These are all so lovely...definitely all gems!

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  8. very nicely put together, Ramesh!!

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  9. Your Haiku is wonderful, all of them. My favorite is your first.

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  10. great one,

    I always enjoy your haiku.

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