Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Dreams Break into Slivers..



Written for 3 WW.. Freak , Downhill , Sliver..

Dreams Break into Slivers..

A freak incident
embroils me in a situation
when perceptions collide
and  the journey downhill begins
dreams break into slivers
I see them shining
scattered around me
God commands and
Fairies and angels
descend from heavens
and help me
pick them up one by one,
As I  solve  the puzzle
a new shape emerges
soothing to the heart
that beats with
a happier rhythm...


RS : )
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10 comments:

  1. Anya PadyamJanuary 18, 2012 at 10:34 AM

    love the positivitiy it emanates...

    Really beautiful piece

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  2. Writer's DaybookJanuary 18, 2012 at 10:35 AM

    This sounds like someone on a journey. Nice to see it turn so positive at the end. Nice job.

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  3. Sheilagh LeeJanuary 18, 2012 at 11:35 AM

    Yes isn't it wonderful when god sends you get a little help

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  4. AngelJanuary 18, 2012 at 3:15 PM

    New beginnings are often wonderful.

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  5. Linda JacobsJanuary 19, 2012 at 4:56 AM

    A nice turn around. Lemons to lemonade. I like that attitude!

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  6. Jae RoseJanuary 19, 2012 at 10:20 AM

    Maybe sometimes dreams need to be shattered in order to piece together new ones..wise as ever in your words..Jae

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  7. Wayne PitchkoJanuary 19, 2012 at 3:11 PM

    nicely done Ramesh....thanks for sharing your words

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  8. WanderJanuary 19, 2012 at 11:17 PM

    This is very well written, the flow is clean and smooth.

    http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com/2012/01/its-only.html

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  9. Denise MoncriefJanuary 20, 2012 at 8:43 AM

    This is wonderful. I love the images of shattered dreams rebuilt into new dreams. Very lovely use of the prompts.

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  10. miss pieJanuary 24, 2012 at 1:52 PM

    a positive uplifting line, one right after the other...

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