Friday, January 20, 2012

She Picks Moon's Smile



Written for
Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..
and Leo's Haiku Heights..
(Thanks to Zongrik for Prompt: Tiptoe)


She Picks Moon's Smile

She walks through
a melted rainbow;
colored footprints..

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Sunflowers
all turn to look at her;
jealous Sun..

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Moon-lit paths
spread under her feet;
evening sighs..

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Darkness of night
offers glittering stars;
she picks Moon's smile

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Music stems from
each of her footfall;
no tiptoe steps..

RS :)

25 comments:

  1. Absolutely beautiful, Ramesh... Wish I were there walking beside her. =)

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  2. Even more beautiful! Love it! =)

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  3. Wonderful ~ lovely ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  4. Oh. This is just so lyrical and beautiful...♥♥♥

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  5. Beautifully done. I liked the 2nd best.

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  6. WHat a beautiful walk..
    Thank you for the word art this morning.
    Happy Friday !

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  7. I absolutely adore the sunflower haiku!!!!!
    Lovely morning, thank you!

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  8. it is as if a soft blanket of soothe overcomes one...

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  9. Lovely... I do like the sunflower and evening sighing ~

    Happy week ~

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  10. She is a goddess, this woman you create with words. I am not remotely her, but she is the divine feminine--and I hope she is your love as well.

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  11. Beautiful. A rapturous ode to the feminine.

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  12. All the haiku are so beautiful..but the first one is my favorite

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  13. blanket of smiles
    I tiptoed into this wonderful blog today

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  14. Nice series Ramesh. Thanks for sharing.

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  15. This is a wonderful series~very lovely images.

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  16. "She picks moon's smile"
    What a wonderful image!

    PS. Elephant and Ant are in progress!

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  17. love that first one, what a picture that would make

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  18. This is so wonderful...words are magic & you sure are magician!One definitely needs to be in love to write so... I'm sure you are inspired & we all do aspire :)

    *between blogger hav recently started threadlike comments...like you see in fb or disque comment. Kindly change your settings to full 'embed comments' to see better changes to be connected with the readers comments on your blog!!*

    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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  19. Thanks Rachana...I am not really a computer savvy person..so don't really try much and that's how my page too is perhaps having a simple template..but nevertheless..I appreciate and shall try to do what you have recommended... keep visiting.. it emboldens..yes!!

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  20. Sunflower haiku and moonlit haiku are beautiful.

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  21. She walks through
    a melted rainbow;
    colored footprints


    Delightful image!!

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  22. If there are no tiptoe steps, is she plodding heavily?


    Tiptoe Haikus

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  23. stunning haiku,

    love the sharp imagery.

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