Friday, January 20, 2012

She Picks Moon's Smile



Written for
Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..
and Leo's Haiku Heights..
(Thanks to Zongrik for Prompt: Tiptoe)


She Picks Moon's Smile

She walks through
a melted rainbow;
colored footprints..

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Sunflowers
all turn to look at her;
jealous Sun..

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Moon-lit paths
spread under her feet;
evening sighs..

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Darkness of night
offers glittering stars;
she picks Moon's smile

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Music stems from
each of her footfall;
no tiptoe steps..

RS :)
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25 comments:

  1. RosieJanuary 20, 2012 at 2:17 AM

    Absolutely beautiful, Ramesh... Wish I were there walking beside her. =)

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  2. RosieJanuary 20, 2012 at 4:24 AM

    Even more beautiful! Love it! =)

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  3. carol l mckennaJanuary 20, 2012 at 5:45 AM

    Wonderful ~ lovely ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  4. Priti LisaJanuary 20, 2012 at 6:37 AM

    Oh. This is just so lyrical and beautiful...♥♥♥

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  5. anthonynorthJanuary 20, 2012 at 6:52 AM

    Beautifully done. I liked the 2nd best.

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  6. Kim MailhotJanuary 20, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    WHat a beautiful walk..
    Thank you for the word art this morning.
    Happy Friday !

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  7. peggy gattoJanuary 20, 2012 at 9:52 AM

    I absolutely adore the sunflower haiku!!!!!
    Lovely morning, thank you!

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  8. miss pieJanuary 20, 2012 at 2:33 PM

    it is as if a soft blanket of soothe overcomes one...

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  9. CherylJanuary 20, 2012 at 4:57 PM

    I love "no tiptoe steps".

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  10. GraceJanuary 20, 2012 at 7:57 PM

    Lovely... I do like the sunflower and evening sighing ~

    Happy week ~

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  11. Fran aka RedondowriterJanuary 20, 2012 at 8:02 PM

    She is a goddess, this woman you create with words. I am not remotely her, but she is the divine feminine--and I hope she is your love as well.

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  12. Annie JeffriesJanuary 20, 2012 at 9:13 PM

    Beautiful. A rapturous ode to the feminine.

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  13. Tarang SinhaJanuary 20, 2012 at 10:32 PM

    Lovely composition!

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  14. Susie ClevengerJanuary 20, 2012 at 10:47 PM

    All the haiku are so beautiful..but the first one is my favorite

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  15. sushJanuary 21, 2012 at 12:21 AM

    blanket of smiles
    I tiptoed into this wonderful blog today

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  16. ChèvrefeuilleJanuary 21, 2012 at 7:05 AM

    Nice series Ramesh. Thanks for sharing.

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  17. TeresaJanuary 21, 2012 at 8:32 AM

    This is a wonderful series~very lovely images.

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  18. Judith WesterfieldJanuary 21, 2012 at 6:09 PM

    "She picks moon's smile"
    What a wonderful image!

    PS. Elephant and Ant are in progress!

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  19. ChristineJanuary 22, 2012 at 3:50 PM

    love that first one, what a picture that would make

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  20. Rachana ShakyawarJanuary 23, 2012 at 3:39 PM

    This is so wonderful...words are magic & you sure are magician!One definitely needs to be in love to write so... I'm sure you are inspired & we all do aspire :)

    *between blogger hav recently started threadlike comments...like you see in fb or disque comment. Kindly change your settings to full 'embed comments' to see better changes to be connected with the readers comments on your blog!!*

    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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  21. Ramesh SoodJanuary 23, 2012 at 7:45 PM

    Thanks Rachana...I am not really a computer savvy person..so don't really try much and that's how my page too is perhaps having a simple template..but nevertheless..I appreciate and shall try to do what you have recommended... keep visiting.. it emboldens..yes!!

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  22. AnonymousJanuary 25, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    Sunflower haiku and moonlit haiku are beautiful.

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  23. becca givensJanuary 25, 2012 at 10:24 PM

    She walks through
    a melted rainbow;
    colored footprints

    Delightful image!!

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  24. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 27, 2012 at 5:13 AM

    If there are no tiptoe steps, is she plodding heavily?


    Tiptoe Haikus

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  25. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryJanuary 30, 2012 at 9:44 AM

    stunning haiku,

    love the sharp imagery.

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