Join me in practising Happiness!!!
Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
I like them both. I love how your last lines in each are unexpected and perfect.
The last one made me giggle :) Thanks for the happy thought.
Superb Haiku's RS, particularly the second one:... RS:I would like to invite you to write for The Haiku Challenge 2012. The prompts are out, rules are set, and for more details visit hereHope you will participate this time..Someone is Special
A sweet duo.
both are well written .
Beautiful would be the word, for that first one takes my breath away! If I could, I would just change only the tense of the second line..winterwalks on tiptoecold feet:)