Written on Picture Prompt
for Bluebell Books...
Image Credit to Whitebook @ DeviantArt, titled A Christmas Story for Rezzan
WISHES GOT WINGS....
I had hidden them inside
Didn’t want to send
But then the push from insideDidn’t want to send
Was pretty strong
And my heart burst open
Wishes for her tumbled out
Before falling down
Got wings and turned
Into beautiful birds
Went flying towards her,
Sitting on the tree
They now tease her
As she waits and prays
No, I won’t mind
Let the wishes surrender
Their wings and
Just fall in her heart
Wishes are meant to sooth
The frayed feelings
Like a balm…
RS :)
Very nice! My favorite line is "Let the wishes surrender, Their wings.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful write, Ramesh. Great message!
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This was wonderful. To love someone so much that the wishes come alive to fly and find their way to the one that needs her heart to be calmed and soothed.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for sharing! Blessings.
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smart metaphor and lovely imaginations.
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