Saturday, January 28, 2012

Mad Butterfly..

Written for OSI Prompt : Wrong..
Thanks to Sandra of La Palabra Diminuta for this week's prompt.



Mad Butterfly...



Mad butterfly
snubs the blooming flower;
wrong vibes..

And then rests on
the shadow of a rose;
right of love..

Tries to sprinkle
some colour of her wings;
vain struggle

Each flutter
disturbs flowers around;
sun wipes shadow

Rose understands,
sends vibes to call her;
mad butterfly..


RS :)


13 comments:

  1. love the quick statements at the end of each.

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  2. ooooooooooo, Ramesh,
    I think you've just begun another series!

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  3. Hi Ramesh ~~ Your not-doing-so-well butterfly reminds me of the Alice in Wonderland Mad Hatter character. The Queen of Hearts once sentenced him to death for "murdering the time."
    ..

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  4. Hi Ramesh, That was beautifully written.

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  5. Lovely poem like lovely rose in it. A smooth flowing and beautiful piece.

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  6. butterflies are beautiful, lovely descriptions.

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  7. This is so interesting~the butterfly chooses the shadow over the flower.

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  8. Mad butterfly. What an interesting concept. I love the softness of the flower in contrast to the chaotic actions of the butterfly. A beautiful poem.

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  9. Poor mad butterfly, enticed away from the rose by a shadow. Thankfully the rose keeps calling.

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  10. Loved that- especially the illusion of a "mad butterfly" Fantastic job!

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  11. i love butterflies and to mad in flying all alone, roaming here and there.

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  12. hi ramesh
    we all have a certain madness-which , while it repels some, also finds its ardent fans in some others!

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