Saturday, January 28, 2012

Mad Butterfly..

Written for OSI Prompt : Wrong..
Thanks to Sandra of La Palabra Diminuta for this week's prompt.



Mad Butterfly...



Mad butterfly
snubs the blooming flower;
wrong vibes..

And then rests on
the shadow of a rose;
right of love..

Tries to sprinkle
some colour of her wings;
vain struggle

Each flutter
disturbs flowers around;
sun wipes shadow

Rose understands,
sends vibes to call her;
mad butterfly..


RS :)


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13 comments:

  1. anthonynorthJanuary 29, 2012 at 1:23 AM

    love the quick statements at the end of each.

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  2. Judith WesterfieldJanuary 29, 2012 at 12:10 PM

    ooooooooooo, Ramesh,
    I think you've just begun another series!

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  3. JimJanuary 29, 2012 at 2:43 PM

    Hi Ramesh ~~ Your not-doing-so-well butterfly reminds me of the Alice in Wonderland Mad Hatter character. The Queen of Hearts once sentenced him to death for "murdering the time."
    ..

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  4. GrammyJanuary 30, 2012 at 1:59 AM

    Hi Ramesh, That was beautifully written.

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  5. Harshad MehtaJanuary 30, 2012 at 2:31 AM

    Lovely poem like lovely rose in it. A smooth flowing and beautiful piece.

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  6. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryJanuary 30, 2012 at 9:48 AM

    butterflies are beautiful, lovely descriptions.

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  7. TeresaJanuary 30, 2012 at 5:15 PM

    This is so interesting~the butterfly chooses the shadow over the flower.

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  8. The Write GirlJanuary 30, 2012 at 6:28 PM

    Mad butterfly. What an interesting concept. I love the softness of the flower in contrast to the chaotic actions of the butterfly. A beautiful poem.

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  9. Denise MoncriefJanuary 30, 2012 at 7:35 PM

    Poor mad butterfly, enticed away from the rose by a shadow. Thankfully the rose keeps calling.

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  10. mareymercyJanuary 31, 2012 at 4:04 PM

    This is lovely!

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  11. PattiFebruary 1, 2012 at 3:19 PM

    Loved that- especially the illusion of a "mad butterfly" Fantastic job!

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  12. Ruchi JainFebruary 3, 2012 at 9:11 PM

    i love butterflies and to mad in flying all alone, roaming here and there.

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  13. raggedgloryFebruary 4, 2012 at 7:01 PM

    hi ramesh
    we all have a certain madness-which , while it repels some, also finds its ardent fans in some others!

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