Wednesday, March 28, 2012

Forceful Winds Strike..

Written for 3WW


Fragrant; Jostle; Remnant;

Forceful Winds Strike..

Fragrant flowers
jostle with each other ;
forceful winds strike

Forceful winds strike;
remnants of my memories
rooted firmly....

RS:)

8 comments:

  1. We both smelt the flowers today Ramesh..I am glad.. beautiful lines..as ever..Jae :)

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  2. Phew, I'm glad the flowers are rooted firmly like your memory, Haiku King!

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  3. Impaled by the bamboo spike,
    the force of the monsoon
    wind against my hope.

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  4. I like the comparison of memories to flowers!

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  5. I always enjoy your Haiku. These paint a lovely picture of the flowers and your hold on your "rooted" memories. I have some of those too. Thank you

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  6. A beautiful picture this haiku paints

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  7. this concise haiku diptych has a lovely flow and message

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/03/28/rent-not-ruined/

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  8. Memories are difficult to eradicate, there are some like flowers and yet there weeds there too, sadly.

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