Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Whenever I Want to Think Aloud..

Written for 3WW



Deviant; adjective: Departing from usual or accepted standards, esp. in social or sexual behavior; noun: a deviant person or thing.

Minuscule; adjective: Extremely small, tiny.
Trivial; adjective: Of little value or importance; (of a person) concerned only with trifling or unimportant things

Whenever I Want to Think Aloud..

  Oh, just because
  I don't bother about
  all that is trivial -
  like your not appreciating
  my new shirt or
  for that matter not
  commenting on my
  new hairstyle
  and your not letting me
  complete a sentence -
  if you want then
  you can label me 'deviant'
  No, even that won't
  be able to make a
  minuscule of a difference...
  And all that I have
  written above is not true
  because your opinion
  about me still matters
  but I want to reach a state
  to become, the kind
  I have thought aloud here..
  Do you know whenever I want
  to think aloud, I write...
 :)

   ****

  Inspired by haiku by MMT...I add a series..for 3WW..

 Shines for the new
 planet in the galaxy;
 deviant Moon

 Deviant Moon
 impressed and lost by
 trivial hints

Trivial hints
so what if it is just a
minuscule  dot...

RS:)

12 comments:

  1. I like this very much. I especially relate to "whenever I want to think aloud, I write"

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  2. great poetry. I love that line when ever I want to think aloud I write.

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  3. Minuscule dotted
    declarative anything
    found before the rest,
    the rest of the load:
    he shoulders the deviant
    forms of the obscure,
    knows disappointment
    leads without any rancor
    to the trivial.

    Ramesh, look what you did to me :D
    Whenever I want to think aloud I write.

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  4. the first poem tears the heart. very good Ramesh.

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  5. -shh (as to the first poem) me too Ramesh..and of course opinions count..but 'saying' it counts more..is 'Moon' another you? Jae

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  6. Both so beautifully written, well done Ramesh.

    All the best
    Marinela

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  7. Yeah, this sums it up well - Do you know whenever I want
    to think aloud, I write...

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  8. The first reminded me of Anne Sexton. Especially this part: like your not appreciating
    my new shirt or
    for that matter not
    commenting on my
    new hairstyle
    and your not letting me
    complete a sentence -
    It just trips off the tongue thinking aloud in my ear. Glad you wrote it down. Nice rhythm and repetition with the next series as well. Glad you were inspired, and glad to see all the inspiration on this page from what you wrote as well. Beautiful comments. Yes, Yes.

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  9. I may not appreciate your shirt but I think your new hairstyle is great Ramesh!:)

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  10. Deviant moon! My favorite. I really like your new way of starting off with the last sentence in each "stanza". Very cool.

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  11. At times trivial, miniscule ignorances make the heart so deviant that it takes serious, mammoth decisions and walks on a path deviant from all else and yet so straight n so correct to the heart.

    Beautiful play of words sir.

    And yes the most brilliant of moons have often been found to be falling for and dimmed dark by the most trivial hints of the most miniscule of dots

    Regards
    RM

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