Written for 'Silence' - OSI ( Thanks to Shail) and for 'Whisper' - Haiku Heights ( Thanks to Paulami) Also shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart
Silence Resides Here..
Inner silence gives
A calm glow on the face, ah,
Moon, a true example..
Yet, it is difficult
To achieve silence, the word
Itself speaks so much..
Focus on each breathe,
Takes me to a place that says,
“Silence resides here”.
To knock at the door, because
Won’t that break silence..
“ Door is illusion, walk in”,
I do that and merge..
By : RS : )
Yes, want to do that and merge!
ReplyDeleteLove this piece.
Love it, especially your question, whether knocking won't break the silence :)
ReplyDeleteThat made me smile :)I was just wondering about next line as I was reading through your thoughts ..And what a revelation! I am simply amazed at the beauty of your thoughts that flows with the ink .. Your wisdom has made another door open , and now am on path to experience this bliss with a smile ! :)
ReplyDeleteGoing to a good place there.
ReplyDeletemagical...!!
ReplyDeleteI find it too true...we are usually afraid to break the silence, silence can be a refuge, don't you think so, RS?
ReplyDeleteRosie
The divine merger with Him takes you to a place that has been upheld as very sacrosanct!!The thought process is so beautiful simple and innocent RS!!.
ReplyDeletesome very good advice here. nice work with the prompt!
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your second Haiku is perfection all by it's self. The are beautifully creative Kudos!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful verses...
ReplyDeletedead woman returns
Excellently said! Very well done!
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Poetry at its best!
ReplyDeleteVery lovely. I found myself not wanting to hear the knock also.
ReplyDeleteso beautiful and thought-provoking.
ReplyDeleteWhat a clever, beautiful poem. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteI feel these so deeply, I have a hard time reading them. I weep.
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely, Ramesh! so simple yet profound.. Well.. I spoke to Anita Rajah and have connected her to my Kerala Associate.. I did not meet Prof. Satyanarayana and hence did not call you. Will keep you updated.. Keep writing!
ReplyDeletesilence sometimes is the only answer ..it can speak volumes ...thank you for sharing
ReplyDeleteI see you have been mediating. Me too. Silence is amazing and so are your words. Have a wonderful week. :)
ReplyDeleteremarkable.
ReplyDeleteCheers!
Thanks a ton for your beautiful contribution along the way.
ReplyDeletekeep up the excellence!
Cheers.
Just lovely- these lines are perfect" Yet, it is difficult
ReplyDeleteTo achieve silence, the word
Itself speaks so much.." and the last line is magic!!!
sorry for responding so late..
ReplyDeleteSuperbly written..
last verse was fantastic !!
Loved it :)