Saturday, August 6, 2011

Dreams Come For Free, na


Written for OSI: DREAMS   Prompt 180   
also shared with  Haiku My Heart and Haiku Heights..



 Dreams Come for Free, na

No, empty pockets
Never scare me even a bit
Dreams come for free, na


Carefully choosing
I pick them in bundles of
Myriad colours


Some get wings and fly
Others get caught in  webs of
Deceit and envy 


Betrayals happen
I again pick them afresh
Dreams come for free, na


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Here's for Haiku Heights....on International Friendship Day

I wait every year
For friendship day, looking up
I greet Moon, my friend

A true friend indeed
Without fear I can share
No need to pretend.. 



By:  RS : )


A very Happy Friendship Day to you all..
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27 comments:

  1. Someone is SpecialAugust 6, 2011 at 10:39 PM

    very beautiful RS... ~ Happy Frendship Day ~

    Someone is Special

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  2. anthonynorthAugust 7, 2011 at 1:51 AM

    Great truth there. And Happy Friendship Day to you.

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  3. NankaAugust 7, 2011 at 8:47 AM

    Happy friendship day to you too RS!! Loved your verses today especially when betrayals happen!! Dream on RS!! ..... and of course they are free!! :)

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  4. AnonymousAugust 7, 2011 at 9:10 AM

    they come for free...!!

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  5. Harshad MehtaAugust 7, 2011 at 9:36 AM

    Dreams come free - made me smile.

    True friend is indeed one who will share without fear, and you can too share with him without fear. excellent haiku.

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  6. BeyondAugust 7, 2011 at 9:45 AM

    oh my God:
    "No, empty pockets
    Never scare me even a bit
    Dreams come for free, na"

    magnificent, truly awesome. I remember reading "I'm the master of my faith and captain of my soul" and trying to be one.. these lines go straight on my blog, u rid me of the fear.. the timing is perfect.

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  7. AnonymousAugust 7, 2011 at 10:37 AM

    Both are just wonderful! You always know the right thing to say.

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  8. SandyCarlsonAugust 7, 2011 at 2:22 PM

    I love the way you capture the exuberant "free"dom of dreaming!

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  9. rebeccaAugust 7, 2011 at 9:00 PM

    to say your heart, mind and soul are moved in purely positive circles; is an understatement.
    thank you for each bright and beautiful word!

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  10. Rosie@travel-i-talesAugust 8, 2011 at 12:27 AM

    If I have the moon for a friend, what more can I ask for? The moon would be a a good nightly companion to be my inspiration as I write.
    Hope my interpretation is not too off tangent from your intention.
    Rosie

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  11. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 7:32 AM

    this had me smiling there is honestly in every word but pours out feeling in every Haiku thank you so much for this!

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  12. adithyasaravanaAugust 8, 2011 at 9:13 AM

    happy friendship day...
    true..
    moon ..No need to pretend.. and staying there inspires you to write more..
    nice haiku

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  13. ArielAugust 8, 2011 at 12:53 PM

    Even through betrayal and deceit we have to build up new dreams. Very true and meaningful.

    I always go after this same friend of yours:)
    Happy Friendship day.

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  14. JimAugust 8, 2011 at 1:34 PM

    Wouldn't it be terrible if we could order our dreams and pay for them? All the intrigue and mystery of dreaming we would miss.
    ..

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  15. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 3:30 PM

    The moon is a constant theme for you--I like it :) Look for my poem about the moon tomorrow. Happy Friendship Day!

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  16. UnknownAugust 8, 2011 at 4:32 PM

    such truth.
    dreams DO come for free.
    and they are the foundation for wondrous futures.

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/08/08/new-reality/

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  17. LeaAugust 8, 2011 at 4:33 PM

    I especially loved... "I pick them in a bundles of myriad colors... happy friendship day to you a few days late!

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  18. The Write GirlAugust 8, 2011 at 7:47 PM

    Your poetry is wonderful. I always enjoy reading your work. Two lovely poems. I enjoyed the rhyme and flow in "Dreams come for free, na"

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  19. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallAugust 9, 2011 at 8:16 AM

    simply brilliant.

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  20. Rashmirekha MannaAugust 9, 2011 at 11:21 AM

    Yes dreams come for free just like the bricks that help us cross puddles. We jump from dream to dream and cross the dark, deceitful, discouraging, mocking puddles of life

    Beautiful write up sir. Really is calming and soothing to the reader.......the reason why I come here to get rejuvenated

    Regards :)

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  21. Marbles in My PocketAugust 9, 2011 at 12:22 PM

    Wonderful, almost musical, writing. Very enjoyable.

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  22. SarasAugust 9, 2011 at 3:37 PM

    Love is for ever

    Keep your smiles and live your life

    Dreams come for free, Na

    Lovely Haiku, Sood Ji

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  23. AnonymousAugust 10, 2011 at 7:21 AM

    http://pure2core.wordpress.com/2011/08/10/dreams/
    first of all I am sending my link to you to visit...
    Amazing coincidence is dream...So nice write.. and happy friendship day

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  24. miss pieAugust 10, 2011 at 12:43 PM

    i cannot help but to ponder these words you speak... nodding, yes, yes, yes....

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  25. PremIAugust 11, 2011 at 6:22 PM

    Of course,dreams come free.
    Glad you can pick them up...
    Betrayal...at least not in dreams!

    To a true friend,no pretension...
    only commitment...

    Lovely! Happy Friendship Week!! :)

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  26. AnonymousAugust 13, 2011 at 7:36 AM

    Both are wonderful - I hope you had a Happy Friendship day!

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  27. Rachana ShakyawarApril 10, 2012 at 5:38 PM

    How sweet is that..!! I loved it naa :)

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