Friday, October 8, 2010

For Haiku My Heart



In absence of Moon
Stars play hide & seek; Happy
Earth takes a turn


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18 comments:

  1. I see your theme, the moon. Fascinates whether seen or unseen. You make the stars talk to us. Good stuff!

    Peace.

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  2. oh how this time of year plays havoc with our solar system, allergies and seasonal change!! Beautiful haiku from you!

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  3. Moon on your mind. . . and now on ours. Thank you.

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  4. Astronomical!

    All the best, Boonie

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  5. I like the idea of the stars playing hide and seek, and the play on words with "earth takes a turn." Fun haiku!

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  6. Twinkle twinkle little star
    How I wonder what you are?

    Wonderment that's what you bring with your twinkling haiku...

    Thank you for the delight.

    Thank you too for the very welcome comments to my haiku, see my tomorrow's post!

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  7. Playing hide 'n seek with the stars...what a beautiful way to start the evening. Thank you for sharing your beautiful haiku. It will bring me good dreams tonight!

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  8. It is a lovely haiku about the wonderful cycles of nature and their playfulness. Nicely done.
    Noelle

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  9. i love the playfulness of this!

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  10. There's nothing like a moonless night to appreciate the stars even more.

    Lovely.

    ~Deb

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  11. I can see this. Thank you for these lovely words.

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  12. oh that fickle moon...lovely Haiku

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  13. lovely idea that the earth is happy... it is good that our earth turns so slowly in our eyes yet spinning faster than we could possibly comprehend... axis, the perfect tilt.... yes, and then a happy bow...

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