Friday, October 8, 2010

For Haiku My Heart



In absence of Moon
Stars play hide & seek; Happy
Earth takes a turn


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17 comments:

  1. SpadomanOctober 8, 2010 at 3:44 AM

    I see your theme, the moon. Fascinates whether seen or unseen. You make the stars talk to us. Good stuff!

    Peace.

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  2. deb did itOctober 8, 2010 at 6:12 AM

    oh how this time of year plays havoc with our solar system, allergies and seasonal change!! Beautiful haiku from you!

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  3. AnonymousOctober 8, 2010 at 6:45 AM

    Oh, more beautiful haiku!

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  4. MeriOctober 8, 2010 at 7:30 AM

    Moon on your mind. . . and now on ours. Thank you.

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  5. AnonymousOctober 8, 2010 at 7:30 AM

    Astronomical!

    All the best, Boonie

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  6. LeslieOctober 8, 2010 at 7:35 AM

    I like the idea of the stars playing hide and seek, and the play on words with "earth takes a turn." Fun haiku!

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  7. foxysueOctober 8, 2010 at 9:08 AM

    Twinkle twinkle little star
    How I wonder what you are?

    Wonderment that's what you bring with your twinkling haiku...

    Thank you for the delight.

    Thank you too for the very welcome comments to my haiku, see my tomorrow's post!

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  8. IleanaOctober 8, 2010 at 1:46 PM

    Playing hide 'n seek with the stars...what a beautiful way to start the evening. Thank you for sharing your beautiful haiku. It will bring me good dreams tonight!

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  9. Noelle ClearwaterOctober 8, 2010 at 5:09 PM

    It is a lovely haiku about the wonderful cycles of nature and their playfulness. Nicely done.
    Noelle

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  10. UmaOctober 8, 2010 at 8:54 PM

    Love your haiku.

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  11. JeevesOctober 9, 2010 at 5:15 AM

    Lovely

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  12. rebeccaOctober 9, 2010 at 6:01 AM

    i love the playfulness of this!

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  13. paper-n-soulOctober 9, 2010 at 6:58 AM

    There's nothing like a moonless night to appreciate the stars even more.

    Lovely.

    ~Deb

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  14. SaumyaOctober 9, 2010 at 7:01 AM

    nice!!

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  15. AnonymousOctober 9, 2010 at 1:54 PM

    oh that fickle moon...lovely Haiku

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  16. AnonymousOctober 10, 2010 at 1:08 PM

    lovely idea that the earth is happy... it is good that our earth turns so slowly in our eyes yet spinning faster than we could possibly comprehend... axis, the perfect tilt.... yes, and then a happy bow...

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  17. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 12, 2010 at 8:56 AM

    super impressive.

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