Monday, October 18, 2010

Mountains Don’t Envy

Written for Poetry Potluck Theme Seven Sins..



Vanishing greens
Urban affluence wants space
Man’s greed


Lightning strikes
Wipes out man’s deadly sins
Angry God..


Nature’s resources
Turn in to sources of damage
Man’s lust for power


Desert exemplify
Sun’s wrath, green piece of land
Seeks blessings


Mountains don’t envy
So, let rivers happily flow
Earth offers thanks..


17 comments:

  1. Pyara Dost,
    Good Afternoon!
    Let the rivers flow and in that flow let us enjoy!
    Beautiful lines!
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  2. pyara dost,
    beautiful lines!
    Let the rivers flow silently and let us be grateful to God!
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  3. .

    Mountains don’t envy....

    Beautiful expression !

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  4. I enjoyed the peace in this poem, very gently put about how we humans and the seven deadly sins try to ruin everything good and beautiful. :))

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  5. I really enjoyed your poem. I am definitely a nature lover, and can see the contrast between the pureness of nature ... and us. Great poem. Thank you :)

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  6. Unique way of viewing things.

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  7. great take on the theme.
    Poignant and to the point.

    :)

    loveNlight
    Gabi

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  8. great poem, thoughgt provoking...glad I found your blog ;)

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  9. Very different type of poem - I like it. Your imagery is very powerful!

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  10. Wow...especially the last one...i loved the expression Mountains don't envy...i really liked your take on the prompt ramesh ji

    and thank you so much for encouraging me with your words...they mean a lot :) god bless...

    keep writing...

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  11. Awesome use of expressions n deeds.... Just Loved it

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  12. I enjoyed the way you incorporated nature into the theme. It added a sense of wonder.
    Victoria

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  13. Strong message and high expectations to live up to.

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  14. this is lovely and wise..

    Great work, Ramesh :)

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