Wednesday, October 27, 2010

Fragile Tremors Rock


Written for 3WW
and Haiku My Heart


Mild tremors born out
Of rampant betrayals each day
Test my fragile heart


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Fragile tremors rock
My sleep, Sun’s rampant knocks
On window work.


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7 comments:

  1. Stimulating stuff. Thanks for this.

    All the best, Boonie

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  2. Hello Ramesh..thank you for visitng and for your kind comment. You have created another two beuatiful hiakus.. they conveyed a lot of wisdom and knowledge of the world and its trials..Jae

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  3. The first haiku is superb Sir...
    loved reading both of them... :)

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  4. Loved the first one especially - me too, about the tremors and betrayals...

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  5. Betrayals.. :( huge tremors.. and lay a broken heart. ~Punam

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  6. Sun's rampant knocks
    on window work

    works well.

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