Friday, October 29, 2010

Stars Play in Shimmering Light

Written for HAIKU MY HEART


Moon hides each fortnight
Stars craving to get their chance
Sparkle happily


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Children, stars on earth,
Wait for the full Moon, play
In shimmering night


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10 comments:

  1. glad to meet you. would definitely visit again. this is a lovely haiku filled with moon shine . . .

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  2. Stars craving and desiring for a peek at the moon...nice..

    Two beautiful haikus... :)

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  3. sparkling haikus today ! "It is a marvekous night for a moon dance..."
    Happy Friday !

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  4. Happy Festival of Lights to you, Ramesh! Diwali is a good time to be writing about Moonshine and starlight. Lovely haikus. Have a wonderful time with friends and loved ones.
    Noelle

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  5. Both of these are fabulous. Each with rich meaning. The stars having fun in the absence of the moons glow, the children playing when it shines. Very nice.

    Peace.

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  6. I like both shimmering light glimpses, nice!

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  7. I like the way you have stated that stars crave to get their chance. A fresh take on the evergreen topic of moon and stars. :) ~Punam

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  8. Carefully crafted words. Thanks for this.

    All the best, Boonie

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  9. I'm always star-struck by your words!

    May you sparkle forever!

    love Sue x

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  10. They are stars on Earth, aren't they? I love that line!

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