Friday, October 22, 2010

Haiku My Heart



Colourful baloons
Melt with skies and vanish
Just like my dreams...



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Happy Earth, receives
Rains and feels warmth of skies
Moon sees & hopes


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11 comments:

  1. What a dreamy haiku! I like the picture you weave here - the balloons, like colorful dreams, vanishing into the skies.

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  2. ramesh...this is beautiful and soft, just never loose your dreams!
    so glad you are here.

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  3. Aww!! Don't let your dreams vanish :(

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  4. Lovely haiku but don't let your dreams float away too.

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  5. Beautiful Haikus here...!!

    Happy Writing dear..!!

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  6. I love the element of personification in your posts Sir...

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  7. At first I thought you might have abandoned your dreams, but maybe the balloons vanish as they are fulfilled. It can be conceived either way. I'll take the positive road.
    Your second haiku speaks of the happiness the Sacred Earth Mother feels when she is nourished by the rain. Wonderful stuff.

    Peace.

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  8. Interesting. In the first haiku, the balloons are dreams received by the sky as they melt and vanish. In the second, the rain is received by the earth and it is happy. Yes, perhaps each is a giving.Lovely haikus.
    Noelle

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  9. your haikus are like dreams...lovely

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  10. Very dreamy -- I especially like the first one.

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  11. hopes.. I like the hope conveyed by this one.

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