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Friday, October 22, 2010
Haiku My Heart
Colourful baloons Melt with skies and vanish Just like my dreams...
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Happy Earth, receives Rains and feels warmth of skies Moon sees & hopes
At first I thought you might have abandoned your dreams, but maybe the balloons vanish as they are fulfilled. It can be conceived either way. I'll take the positive road. Your second haiku speaks of the happiness the Sacred Earth Mother feels when she is nourished by the rain. Wonderful stuff.
Interesting. In the first haiku, the balloons are dreams received by the sky as they melt and vanish. In the second, the rain is received by the earth and it is happy. Yes, perhaps each is a giving.Lovely haikus. Noelle
What a dreamy haiku! I like the picture you weave here - the balloons, like colorful dreams, vanishing into the skies.
ReplyDeleteramesh...this is beautiful and soft, just never loose your dreams!
ReplyDeleteso glad you are here.
Aww!! Don't let your dreams vanish :(
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku but don't let your dreams float away too.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Haikus here...!!
ReplyDeleteHappy Writing dear..!!
I love the element of personification in your posts Sir...
ReplyDeleteAt first I thought you might have abandoned your dreams, but maybe the balloons vanish as they are fulfilled. It can be conceived either way. I'll take the positive road.
ReplyDeleteYour second haiku speaks of the happiness the Sacred Earth Mother feels when she is nourished by the rain. Wonderful stuff.
Peace.
Interesting. In the first haiku, the balloons are dreams received by the sky as they melt and vanish. In the second, the rain is received by the earth and it is happy. Yes, perhaps each is a giving.Lovely haikus.
ReplyDeleteNoelle
your haikus are like dreams...lovely
ReplyDeleteVery dreamy -- I especially like the first one.
ReplyDeletehopes.. I like the hope conveyed by this one.
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