Monday, October 18, 2010

Knock Knock

Written for LOL Prompt: Knock Knock


Opportunity smiled

Knock, Knock
He opened the door
Opportunity smiled
Ah, he couldn’t
Wasn’t wearing his teeth



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Watching in Mute Astonishment

King Rodent is furious,
Angry and mad
Who will bear his wrath
Lion stands trembling & wondering
Elephant is pale
Tiger sits with his head down
Deer and Rabbit
Humble spectators
Watching in mute
Astonishment, and then
Suddenly, out of the blue
Some noise from a distance
Then louder and louder
Nearer and nearer
It’s Knock - Knock, knock -knock
And lo! Rodent wakes up…

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5 comments:

  1. Oh god Rameshji!! Who would this be?? Especially when opportunity came smiling...

    I pity that Lion and Tiger and that humble spectator bunny too. Was there no owl there?? ;) LOL :D Loved the Ratty's dream.

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  2. LOL Rameshji!! :D
    Looks like an animal farm this time at LOL, where each one is hilarious!!

    I'm hosting LOL for sometime now, to give Leo a break. Do keep coming back with more LOL's for us. You are hilarious!! :D

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  3. Anu's comments picked up from email. Thanks Anu..

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    pyara dost,

    Good Evening!
    Opportunity doesn't knock again unless one is too lucky.
    Thoughtprovoking lines and humorous. Wishing you a lovely evening. Sasneham,
    Anu

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    I am so happy that you have been here on my page.. it emboldens.. as you know.

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  4. LOL, thanks for the smiles!!!

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