Written for LOL Prompt: Knock Knock
Opportunity smiled
Knock, Knock
He opened the door
Opportunity smiled
Ah, he couldn’t
Wasn’t wearing his teeth
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Watching in Mute Astonishment
King Rodent is furious,
Angry and mad
Who will bear his wrath
Lion stands trembling & wondering
Elephant is pale
Tiger sits with his head down
Deer and Rabbit
Humble spectators
Watching in mute
Astonishment, and then
Suddenly, out of the blue
Some noise from a distance
Then louder and louder
Nearer and nearer
It’s Knock - Knock, knock -knock
And lo! Rodent wakes up…
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Oh god Rameshji!! Who would this be?? Especially when opportunity came smiling...
ReplyDeleteI pity that Lion and Tiger and that humble spectator bunny too. Was there no owl there?? ;) LOL :D Loved the Ratty's dream.
LOL Rameshji!! :D
ReplyDeleteLooks like an animal farm this time at LOL, where each one is hilarious!!
I'm hosting LOL for sometime now, to give Leo a break. Do keep coming back with more LOL's for us. You are hilarious!! :D
Anu's comments picked up from email. Thanks Anu..
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pyara dost,
Good Evening!
Opportunity doesn't knock again unless one is too lucky.
Thoughtprovoking lines and humorous. Wishing you a lovely evening. Sasneham,
Anu
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ReplyDeleteLOL, thanks for the smiles!!!
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