Sunday, October 24, 2010

A Mole on a Dame’s Chin



Written for OSI Prompt : GraceHaiku Heights Prompt: Optimistic
Haiku:

Flowers Are Optimistic

Nature breathes grace;

Flowers are optimistic
Bloom happily..


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A Mole on a Dame’s Chin
Beaming moon and sparkling stars
Singing butterflies, smiling flowers

A star studded unending sky
To explore, birds happily fly

A Cuckoo’s sweet morning song
Door bell’s melodious ding-dong

An earth full of sunlight
A rainbow’s delicious sight

Snow-clad high mountains
Whistling streams, flirty fountains

A little child’s cute smile
How the happy moments pile

A mole on a dame’s chin
A monkey’s naughty grin

Laughing and dancing trees
A cool and humming breeze

Ah, a solitary morning’s walk
When all the good things talk

Plenty of colorful toys
Life’s lovely little joys

Grace of God plentiful & abound
Feels so nice and good to be around

Enjoying such delicacies of life
Oh, it's so much fun to be alive

Let’s remember those who are not
And let them live in our thoughts..

29 comments:

  1. beautiful...simple...fresh and happy take on the prompts..!!!

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  2. You cover so much in this, and beautifully.

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  3. "Oh, is so much fun to be alive."

    Beautiful.

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  4. You see a beautiful world. And now for that morning walk!

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  5. Well done Ramesh Sood and you have covered a lot of ground :) Yes it is Gods grace that we are alive enjoying the delicacies of life.

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  6. Ihad the same thought of optimistic flowers! Very nice.

    Optimistic

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  7. Grace hides in every nook and cranny...loved your poem!

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  8. awe.. just in awe of the amazing end.

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  9. Lovely haiku. I really loved the second poem, especially with its ending to remember our loved ones.

    Teresa

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  10. What a role model kind of thought. Thank you ! Please have a good new week.


    daily athens

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  11. I enjoyed each of your poems...A Mole on a Dame's Chin certainly made me smile. Lovely poetry.

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  12. just one word Sir...
    Awesome...
    loved both of them... :)

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  13. Both so good..

    an ode

    And do get aboard the Poetry Train every Monday
    mornings and thereafter!

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  14. Thank God I was born
    To be able to experience
    All the graceful beauty
    In this lovely poem of yours!

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  15. Beautiful haiku.The second was nice,smooth flow

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  16. Both are wonderful and optimistic poems; I thoroughly enjoyed them.

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  17. Loved the Haiku but the Mole Oh so uplifting I giggled through some of it smiled through other parts and sighed at the end! Thanks for the trip!

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  18. Thanks a lot every one of you..feedback and comments always help to think afresh..Let us continue to practice happiness..happy hearts, all!

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  19. lovely verse...so much to see and touch and it is good to be alive...smiles. nice one shot!

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  20. flowers bloom optimistically,
    what a positive message.
    masterful job

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  21. Liked it .. simple and beautiful...


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  22. So much beauty, so much to be thankful about!

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  23. I love all the reminders of grace on our lives!!!

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  24. Ah, a solitary morning’s walk
    When all the good things talk

    all around us and inside us - just listen!

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  25. Oh R'ji.. your flowers are just like you.. so beautiful in their optimism.. :)

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  26. What a peaceful and happy poem. The reader feels pulled into sunshine and color.

    and your haiku the perfect breath of fresh air

    Thank you Ramesh for the delightful One Shot contributions

    Moon smiles

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  27. Hello Ramesh,

    Interesting poem! Great style of expression.

    Regards,
    Neena Dayal

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