Written for OSI Prompt : GraceHaiku Heights Prompt: Optimistic
Haiku:
Flowers Are Optimistic
Nature breathes grace;
Flowers are optimistic
Bloom happily..
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A Mole on a Dame’s Chin
Beaming moon and sparkling stars
Singing butterflies, smiling flowers
A star studded unending sky
To explore, birds happily fly
A Cuckoo’s sweet morning song
Door bell’s melodious ding-dong
An earth full of sunlight
A rainbow’s delicious sight
Snow-clad high mountains
Whistling streams, flirty fountains
A little child’s cute smile
How the happy moments pile
A mole on a dame’s chin
A monkey’s naughty grin
Laughing and dancing trees
A cool and humming breeze
Ah, a solitary morning’s walk
When all the good things talk
Plenty of colorful toys
Life’s lovely little joys
Grace of God plentiful & abound
Feels so nice and good to be around
Enjoying such delicacies of life
Oh, it's so much fun to be alive
Let’s remember those who are not
And let them live in our thoughts..
beautiful...simple...fresh and happy take on the prompts..!!!
ReplyDeleteYou cover so much in this, and beautifully.
ReplyDelete"Oh, is so much fun to be alive."
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
Lovely couplets !
ReplyDeleteYou see a beautiful world. And now for that morning walk!
ReplyDeleteWell done Ramesh Sood and you have covered a lot of ground :) Yes it is Gods grace that we are alive enjoying the delicacies of life.
ReplyDeleteIhad the same thought of optimistic flowers! Very nice.
ReplyDeleteOptimistic
Grace hides in every nook and cranny...loved your poem!
ReplyDeleteawe.. just in awe of the amazing end.
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku. I really loved the second poem, especially with its ending to remember our loved ones.
ReplyDeleteTeresa
What a role model kind of thought. Thank you ! Please have a good new week.
ReplyDeletedaily athens
Beautiful..thank goodness for the flowers
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed each of your poems...A Mole on a Dame's Chin certainly made me smile. Lovely poetry.
ReplyDeletejust one word Sir...
ReplyDeleteAwesome...
loved both of them... :)
Both so good..
ReplyDeletean ode
And do get aboard the Poetry Train every Monday
mornings and thereafter!
Thank God I was born
ReplyDeleteTo be able to experience
All the graceful beauty
In this lovely poem of yours!
Beautiful haiku.The second was nice,smooth flow
ReplyDeleteBoth are wonderful and optimistic poems; I thoroughly enjoyed them.
ReplyDeleteLoved the Haiku but the Mole Oh so uplifting I giggled through some of it smiled through other parts and sighed at the end! Thanks for the trip!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot every one of you..feedback and comments always help to think afresh..Let us continue to practice happiness..happy hearts, all!
ReplyDeletelovely verse...so much to see and touch and it is good to be alive...smiles. nice one shot!
ReplyDeleteflowers bloom optimistically,
ReplyDeletewhat a positive message.
masterful job
Liked it .. simple and beautiful...
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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So much beauty, so much to be thankful about!
ReplyDeleteI love all the reminders of grace on our lives!!!
ReplyDeleteAh, a solitary morning’s walk
ReplyDeleteWhen all the good things talk
all around us and inside us - just listen!
Oh R'ji.. your flowers are just like you.. so beautiful in their optimism.. :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a peaceful and happy poem. The reader feels pulled into sunshine and color.
ReplyDeleteand your haiku the perfect breath of fresh air
Thank you Ramesh for the delightful One Shot contributions
Moon smiles
Hello Ramesh,
ReplyDeleteInteresting poem! Great style of expression.
Regards,
Neena Dayal