Haikus for 3WW Prompts: Effect, Immense, Shimmer
Also placed for Haiku My Heart
Immense effect
Of a full Moon, wet shingles
Shimmer like stars
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Immense misty effect
gilds the lake, Moon’s reflection
Shimmers shyly
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Immense effect
Of comments from friends, happy
Haikus shimmer
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Added on Friday, the 22nd October, 2010
specially for Haiku My Heart
Happy Earth, receives
Rains and feels warmth of skies
Moon sees & hopes
Loved the second Haiku best!! Liked the imagery created by it, the mist gliding over the lake and moon's reflection in it.
ReplyDeleteha thats a good one :) i liked it!
ReplyDeleteyou have a deft handling of the art that is haiku.
ReplyDeleteLovely haikus Sir...
ReplyDeleteThe last one made my heart smile.. :)
I liked them all, but being astronomically minded, I really liked the first one, and the word picture you created. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteAnd I am immensely affected by your shimmering 'kus' on the moon!
ReplyDeleteTotally mesmerizing!
Your first haiku was my favourite..beautifully crafted (I just love your profile picture of the happy flower as well)Thanks for your vist..Jae
ReplyDeleteAll three are delightful! I especially enjoyed the idea of wet shingles in the moonlight. :-) You write such nice pieces about moonlight.
ReplyDeletemore beauty,
ReplyDeletethank you!
Shingles shimmering like stars--only a poet could see the magical in the ordinary. Ah!
ReplyDeleteHaiku My Heart…with Comfort
wonderful haikus, every one of them.
ReplyDeleteMore classic haiku from you. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteAll the best, Boonie
The Moon is mentioned here a lot. Last night, we had a large round one, and tonight, I'll start a fire and sit with her for a while. Immense is a natural descriptive word for Grandmother Moon. And you are welcome, the comments are well deserved.
ReplyDeletePeace.
Nice ways to weave those three words together.
ReplyDeletelovely perspective.
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ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for the support to Jingle Poetry Potluck, I could not always find time to show how much we appreciate your support, here, three awards for you, Happy Monday, Happy Blogging! xxx
Lovely haiku and excellent use of the three words. The moon, shingles shimmering... lovely picture evoked :)
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