Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Moon’s Reflection Shimmers Shyly

Haikus for 3WW Prompts: Effect, Immense, Shimmer
Also placed for Haiku My Heart


Immense effect
Of a full Moon, wet shingles
Shimmer like stars


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Immense misty effect
gilds the lake, Moon’s reflection
Shimmers shyly



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Immense effect
Of comments from friends, happy
Haikus shimmer


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Added on Friday, the 22nd October, 2010
specially for Haiku My Heart


Happy Earth, receives
Rains and feels warmth of skies
Moon sees & hopes

17 comments:

  1. Loved the second Haiku best!! Liked the imagery created by it, the mist gliding over the lake and moon's reflection in it.

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  2. ha thats a good one :) i liked it!

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  3. you have a deft handling of the art that is haiku.

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  4. Lovely haikus Sir...
    The last one made my heart smile.. :)

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  5. I liked them all, but being astronomically minded, I really liked the first one, and the word picture you created. Thank you!

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  6. And I am immensely affected by your shimmering 'kus' on the moon!

    Totally mesmerizing!

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  7. Your first haiku was my favourite..beautifully crafted (I just love your profile picture of the happy flower as well)Thanks for your vist..Jae

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  8. All three are delightful! I especially enjoyed the idea of wet shingles in the moonlight. :-) You write such nice pieces about moonlight.

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  9. Shingles shimmering like stars--only a poet could see the magical in the ordinary. Ah!


    Haiku My Heart…with Comfort

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  10. wonderful haikus, every one of them.

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  11. More classic haiku from you. Thanks.

    All the best, Boonie

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  12. The Moon is mentioned here a lot. Last night, we had a large round one, and tonight, I'll start a fire and sit with her for a while. Immense is a natural descriptive word for Grandmother Moon. And you are welcome, the comments are well deserved.

    Peace.

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  13. Nice ways to weave those three words together.

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    Thanks a lot for the support to Jingle Poetry Potluck, I could not always find time to show how much we appreciate your support, here, three awards for you, Happy Monday, Happy Blogging! xxx

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  15. Lovely haiku and excellent use of the three words. The moon, shingles shimmering... lovely picture evoked :)

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