Saturday, December 10, 2011

Covert Gestures..




Written for Haiku Heights
Prompt: Covert

Thanks to Tarang Sinha who blogs over at Tarang 

She peeks from
behind the curtains
Covert gesture


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Covert gesture
He chats with his friends
stealing glances


RS : )

13 comments:

  1. I should know those covert gestures...:)))

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  2. Nicely done. Secret gestures to someone where you have the crush on :)

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  3. Nice covert haiku set...unspoken and unrevealed ~

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  4. unspoken exchange.Nicely done.Greetings.

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    1. And would these be familiar situations maam Deja Vu maybe or Catch 22 ??

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  5. Reminds me of those old hindi songs. nice haiku :)

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  6. Enjoyed the haiku...thanks.
    Peace
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  7. love and liking much better when it's covert - speeds up the heart beat. Well described!
    Like them!

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  8. I like these...peeking behind the curtain and stealing glances..you did a wonderful job with the word "covert"

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  9. very nice. sounds like you were having fun with the prompt. it was indeed a very joyable prompt to work with.

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  10. In both of these, "covert gesture" is simply another way of saying what is in the other two lines. try for a stronger juxtaposition.

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