Saturday, December 10, 2011

Covert Gestures..




Written for Haiku Heights
Prompt: Covert

Thanks to Tarang Sinha who blogs over at Tarang 

She peeks from
behind the curtains
Covert gesture


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Covert gesture
He chats with his friends
stealing glances


RS : )
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13 comments:

  1. AmityDecember 10, 2011 at 2:44 AM

    I should know those covert gestures...:)))

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  2. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 10, 2011 at 3:49 AM

    Nicely done. Secret gestures to someone where you have the crush on :)

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  3. GraceDecember 10, 2011 at 4:49 AM

    Nice covert haiku set...unspoken and unrevealed ~

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  4. AnonymousDecember 10, 2011 at 5:43 AM

    unspoken exchange.Nicely done.Greetings.

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    1. Web Design Gold CoastSeptember 27, 2012 at 9:56 AM

      And would these be familiar situations maam Deja Vu maybe or Catch 22 ??

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  5. anthonynorthDecember 10, 2011 at 7:16 AM

    Covert covered nicely.

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  6. NehaDecember 10, 2011 at 10:03 AM

    Reminds me of those old hindi songs. nice haiku :)

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  7. siggiofmaineDecember 10, 2011 at 3:36 PM

    Enjoyed the haiku...thanks.
    Peace
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  8. AnonymousDecember 10, 2011 at 6:45 PM

    Oooh, I like them! :-)

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  9. Judith WesterfieldDecember 10, 2011 at 7:24 PM

    love and liking much better when it's covert - speeds up the heart beat. Well described!
    Like them!

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  10. Susie ClevengerDecember 10, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    I like these...peeking behind the curtain and stealing glances..you did a wonderful job with the word "covert"

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  11. Olive TreeDecember 13, 2011 at 7:04 AM

    very nice. sounds like you were having fun with the prompt. it was indeed a very joyable prompt to work with.

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  12. BillDecember 20, 2011 at 2:27 PM

    In both of these, "covert gesture" is simply another way of saying what is in the other two lines. try for a stronger juxtaposition.

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