Monday, December 19, 2011

He Filled His Hands With Snowflakes..



Written for Jingle Poetry at The Gooseberry Garden....
picked up the theme as.. Snow..

He Filled His Hands With Snowflakes..

He filled his hands
With snowflakes
And let them slip through
To fall in her hands
As she waited in excitement
They melted
Just like that moment…

RS : )
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6 comments:

  1. Judith WesterfieldDecember 19, 2011 at 8:51 PM

    "they melted
    just like that moment. . ."
    Is that perfect - YES!
    Really lovely and so true how time is like a snowflake - precious, unique and ever changing into another element.

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  2. Rachana ShakyawarDecember 19, 2011 at 9:41 PM

    O dear melting moment!
    Loved it...so serene so passionate so true....
    Cant believe it I saw a whole movie in just few lines..
    But I knw....picture abhi baki hai mere dost...so looking forward to the series of melting moments..well i dint say anything I'm only hinting!

    ~ Happy Holidays!

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherDecember 20, 2011 at 5:15 AM

    Such disappointment here, Ramesh! Ah, unrequited love!

    Spirit of Christmas

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  4. Marbles in My PocketDecember 20, 2011 at 7:40 AM

    Very nice write, Ramesh! very visual wording!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/

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  5. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryDecember 21, 2011 at 3:19 AM

    love it,

    I feel the coldness of snow now.
    cheers.

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  6. KayDecember 21, 2011 at 2:43 PM

    Oh Ramesh, this is so beautifully romantic! xoXox

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