Thursday, December 15, 2011

Stale Fruits; Cold Dreams..



Written for Rebecca's
Haiku My Heart..



Stale fruits
Hunger makes her
smile fresh

***

She shivers
in the warmth of quilt
Cold dreams


RS :)


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25 comments:

  1. anthonynorthDecember 16, 2011 at 2:13 AM

    Excellent images in those.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 16, 2011 at 2:46 AM

    Beautifully expressed...

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  3. RosieDecember 16, 2011 at 3:14 AM

    Great words for the imagination... =)

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  4. GrammyDecember 16, 2011 at 3:33 AM

    Very original thoughts. :)
    Have a great day my friend. I need to ponder and come up with some thoughts again.

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  5. foxysueDecember 16, 2011 at 3:57 AM

    As you say things are not always as they seem, sometimes I am hot and cold at the same time!

    Sue x

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  6. A Bit of the BlarneyDecember 16, 2011 at 4:21 AM

    Wonderful images! Wishing you well! Cathy

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  7. SpadomanDecember 16, 2011 at 5:17 AM

    The ideas that run though my head while reading these is amazing! So many avenues to go down. Every reader can draw their own conclusion. I love your work.

    Peace

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  8. rebeccaDecember 16, 2011 at 6:18 AM

    stunning word crafting ramesh!

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  9. MaryDecember 16, 2011 at 6:25 AM

    Both are good. I especially like the second one. Rings truth.

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  10. Noelle ClearwaterDecember 16, 2011 at 6:27 AM

    Lovely juxtaposition of imagery, Ramesh to bring a physical memory to the reader's mind. You do a wonderful job. Good wordsmithing.
    Namaste,
    Noelle

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  11. Maude LynnDecember 16, 2011 at 6:35 AM

    That second one made me shiver!

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  12. deb did itDecember 16, 2011 at 7:01 AM

    your wordsmith talents amuse and entertain me. thank you

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  13. Priti LisaDecember 16, 2011 at 8:42 AM

    I love the mystery in this poem.
    What I see and what you meant for me to see...exactly what a perfect haiku should do.
    ♥♥♥

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  14. carol l mckennaDecember 16, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    Just learning haiku ~ yours are excellent ~~ thanks, namaste, Carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  15. AnonymousDecember 16, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    I agree with all that'w been said...these words lead me down many a different path.

    beautiful

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  16. LenoraDecember 16, 2011 at 1:56 PM

    I see more than 1 picture here..

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  17. Dawn ElliottDecember 16, 2011 at 6:14 PM

    ...hunger makes her smile fresh... is genius! I love it!

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  18. dikviprealDecember 16, 2011 at 8:37 PM

    Thank you for sharing.

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  19. Judith WesterfieldDecember 16, 2011 at 9:40 PM

    I so like the "cold dreams" haiku. Probably because I have two layers of quilt on the bed!

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  20. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 17, 2011 at 5:48 AM

    Love these haiku Ramesh, well crafted and shown great imagery

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  21. *jean*December 17, 2011 at 6:12 AM

    exactly how i feel this morning...perfecto

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  22. Fran aka RedondowriterDecember 17, 2011 at 7:41 PM

    You sure struck a chord with me with both these haikus, Ramesh. Moreso the cold one; I am she, I think.

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  23. Susie ClevengerDecember 22, 2011 at 12:06 AM

    Wow...Both are fantastic, but the last one really speaks to me...She shivers in the warmth of guilt

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  24. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryDecember 23, 2011 at 7:39 AM

    haunting and beautiful.

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  25. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryDecember 23, 2011 at 7:39 AM

    haunting and beautiful.

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