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One single Impression prompt # 201: Change
Haiku Heights prompt # 100: Travel
A Series of Haiku ... Known Streets All
Travel in new year
Change in attire makes my
mirror image smile...
****
Oh, back of my head
feels a different pillow
Irritating, that!
****
I often
Travel to my past
Known streets all..
****
I need some courage
for my own inward journey
Hangs high on a tree..
One single Impression prompt # 201: Change
Haiku Heights prompt # 100: Travel
A Series of Haiku ... Known Streets All
Travel in new year
Change in attire makes my
mirror image smile...
****
Oh, back of my head
feels a different pillow
Irritating, that!
****
I often
Travel to my past
Known streets all..
****
I need some courage
for my own inward journey
Hangs high on a tree..
RS :)
Glorious bits and pieces of writing... the 'flow' is palpable..
ReplyDeleteOh, and wish a very happy new year.... Hope to enjoy more of the delicious flow this year!
ReplyDeleteWonderful Haikus.
ReplyDeleteLove this expression -'Mirror image smile'
Wish you Happy New Year and all that follows. Keep this flow going and growing.
Beautifully penned.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year Rameshji... Thoughtful Haiku from your pen.. Loved it..
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nice thoughts!
ReplyDeletethoughtful haiku. I especially like the last one. Courage will come to you when the time is ready :) Happy New Year.
ReplyDeleteAn inward journey is the best one ~
ReplyDeleteWishing you Happy New Year ~
Cheers ~
last one is best..:)
ReplyDeleteYour story telling verses remind me of the story about princes who could find the pea under her matress.
ReplyDelete..
wow!
ReplyDeleteLoved it! Though the third one touched my heart cord!
'Known streets all...' amazing!
Wonder what went into your mind...you intervened these lines together!! Loved it!!
Happy New Year,2012!
~Keep the Spark ALive..
traveling to one's past is cool.
ReplyDeletelovely review.
Another wonderful poem Ramesh. I like how the first stanza particularly drew me in. Wishing you a Happy New Year!
ReplyDeleteyet another masterpiece-
ReplyDelete"I need some courage
for my own inward journey
Hangs high on a tree.."
This new year it was a journey inward and I learned that the fear is always there, it is just about winning it.
I enjoyed your travels, Ramesh, and feelsympathy for your irritation with the new pillow!
ReplyDeleteI just spent a week in Mexico with a different pillow--and it felt strange!
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year, Ramesh!
As You Travel On
Keep Smiling...
ReplyDeleteLovely Haiku s!
Happy New Year!!
i like your version of traveling to the past
ReplyDeleteThat journey can be a tough one! Well done.
ReplyDeleteI often
ReplyDeleteTravel to my past
Known streets all..
This one is my favorite. Wonderfully sparse and perfectly expressed.
Beautiful Haiku's!
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year Ramesh!
Well thought of RS...:)
ReplyDeleteHappy new year!
I espespecially liked the third one, it's so good to read 'travel back to my past'.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing,
Namaste