Having got some wise inputs from
Bill of http://haiku-usa.blogspot.com/
I have tried to catch a moment in the haiku here.....
Her finger tip moves
On dry skin of my arm
'Papa' appears in white..
( In reply to Judy's question I am putting the answer here..
Father at home is addressed as 'Papa' too
by children in Hindi or Punjabi speaking families)
( In reply to Judy's question I am putting the answer here..
Father at home is addressed as 'Papa' too
by children in Hindi or Punjabi speaking families)
RS :)
Ramesh,
ReplyDeletePlease tell me what "papa" is. I am a bit dense this a.m. as I woke at 3 am . . .
How lovely. x
ReplyDeleteA wonderful in the moment haiku!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done.
ReplyDeleteWell done ~ beautiful ~~ thanks, namaste, Carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/corazon VAD for Dec
ReplyDeleteappears in white, just like your beloved moon!
ReplyDeleteI see your little girl (do you have one?) caressing her daddy--and that's what I thought before I saw your explanation.
ReplyDeleteAs I read it,I saw it in my mind's eye!Very good!!=-)
ReplyDeleteNice sharing Sir ! Everybody's papa don't appear like this. :-(
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