Join me in practising Happiness!!!
Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
Enjoyed them both. It is that incompleteness that keeps us striving, I think.
she must be fun to be around
Sparse, elegant and complete - I can hear the change in tone from when I first started reading your haiku's. Very very nice.
Unique and to the point...very nice, ejoyable.PeaceSiggi in Downeast Maine
I am developing wings as I go ... nicely done, Ramesh!
our haiku are uplifting and definitely can make anyone smile and inspire :)
love the first one.. perfect!
In that vast blue space, I wish to fly freely and feel that wonderful space!
"vast blue space" is intriguing in its juxtaposition of possibility and limitation. It's open to a number of interpretations.
I like both of them my friend.Melanie
You have a gift for wrapping profound meaning in a very few words. A lovely pair.
Nice haiku...the first is my favorite...my wings are still..incomplete
very elegant Haiku.
Greetings:how are you today?great big thanks for your support and attention to poets rally,hope to see you share any time around the year…stay blessed, your talent rocks.Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.xoxox