Saturday, December 3, 2011

Her Heart is Full..

Haiku Written for Haiku Heights
Thanks to Yamini Meduri for the prompt  'Space'  




Vast blue space 
My wings are still
Incomplete...


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Her heart is full
Goodies flow
continuously...



RS :)

14 comments:

  1. Enjoyed them both. It is that incompleteness that keeps us striving, I think.

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  2. Sparse, elegant and complete - I can hear the change in tone from when I first started reading your haiku's. Very very nice.

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  3. Unique and to the point...
    very nice, ejoyable.
    Peace
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  4. I am developing wings as I go ... nicely done, Ramesh!

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  5. our haiku are uplifting and definitely can make anyone smile and inspire :)

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  6. In that vast blue space, I wish to fly freely and feel that wonderful space!

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  7. "vast blue space" is intriguing in its juxtaposition of possibility and limitation. It's open to a number of interpretations.

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  8. I like both of them my friend.


    Melanie

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  9. You have a gift for wrapping profound meaning in a very few words. A lovely pair.

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  10. Nice haiku...the first is my favorite...my wings are still..incomplete

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  11. Greetings:

    how are you today?

    great big thanks for your support and attention to poets rally,
    hope to see you share any time around the year…

    stay blessed, your talent rocks.
    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

    xoxox

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