April A2Z Heights -
Day 30
Prompt: Zebra Crossing
I hurry to cross;
she holds my hand, leads me to
a zebra crossing
A zebra crossing;
whenever on life's cross-roads
her subtle hint helps
Her subtle hint helps;
an image of zebra crossing
slows me down a bit
RS:)
Thanks Leo for a great month....you made my mid-night
hours full of excitement and creativity....and
thanks to HER..for letting me sit for writing Haiku
so late and wait for the clock to strike 0000 hrs.. everyday..
hours full of excitement and creativity....and
thanks to HER..for letting me sit for writing Haiku
so late and wait for the clock to strike 0000 hrs.. everyday..
Wonderful take on the prompt! Your words always attract me!
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One more point in her favour and you cannot compete with her for sure RS!! :D Today she has beaten you hollow!! :D
ReplyDeleteGreat read today!!
It sounds like you have a lovely partner. And a lovely way with poetry.
ReplyDeleteOh thats so nicely done. 'whenever on life's cross-roads' a brilliant line.
ReplyDeleteLoved your haiku, superb and full of deep love! :)
Beautiful haiku...
ReplyDeleteI'm really glad that the mid-night routine is coming to an end!Ahhh...what a relief!:D
I really like this set.
ReplyDeleteThank you also for sharing your midnight hours ... and thank her for allowing your readers to enjoy this month a little bit more ☺
Peace
Siggi
This delighted me! You took a tough prompt and made it romantic! :)
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Lovely sentiments expressed here.
ReplyDeleteThank u sir for daily dose of haiku...
ReplyDeleteAnd has been a pleasure to read your blog..
As always... This haiku is no less romantic!
Reality of a the story of life, she slows me down a bit..sometimes very necessary
ReplyDeleteVery nice use of 'cross road' here. That is when one is looking for advice and guidance.
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