Saturday, April 6, 2013

Orange Spills on the Water


Day 07


 
 

Orange Spills on the Water
 
 
Soothing roar of waves
orange spills on the water;
strong breeze whistles joy
 
Strong breeze whistles joy
tickling her hair naughtily;
children pick sea shells
 
Children pick sea shells;
grains of sand shine on her feet
like tiny sunsets
 
Like tiny sunsets
her eyes reflect deeper calm;
she sits on a rock
 
She sits on a rock;
heart, mind join and listen to
soothing roar of waves..
 
 
 
RS:)
 
 
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14 comments:

  1. NankaApril 6, 2013 at 12:25 PM

    Beautiful RS!! Reminds me of a visit to a seashore. I think I can see a seagull in here!!

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  2. PranitaApril 6, 2013 at 12:33 PM

    'grains of sand shine on her feet
    like tiny sunsetsu'


    So original... these lines blew my mind literally.. ur a true romantic Ramesh ji! :D

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  3. Gemma WisemanApril 6, 2013 at 3:12 PM

    Love how the tiny sunsets on her feet become the tiny sunsets in her eyes! Lovely!

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  4. UnknownApril 6, 2013 at 5:10 PM

    Very unique take well done

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  5. AnonymousApril 6, 2013 at 7:42 PM

    Those tiny sunsets are entrancing! :)

    Love Letter

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  6. The Write GirlApril 6, 2013 at 8:49 PM

    I love your haiku Ramesh. You paint a beautiful day at the beach!

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  7. lishanaApril 6, 2013 at 9:10 PM

    her eyes reflect deeper calm" loved it

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  8. rallentandaApril 6, 2013 at 11:10 PM

    The first one is gorgeous...inspires a painting.

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  9. AnonymousApril 7, 2013 at 4:51 AM

    Can I see a mermaid? Beautiful, I can hear to ocean sounds in your sibilence

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  10. Andy SewinaApril 7, 2013 at 10:41 AM

    I think the soothing roar of waves does it for me! Nicely!!

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  11. Amrit SinhaApril 7, 2013 at 12:24 PM

    Orange spills set the mood ... and then onward there is magic of words :-)

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  12. Empty nester at lastApril 7, 2013 at 4:15 PM

    Love it!

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  13. SuzyApril 7, 2013 at 8:20 PM

    I love the way you wove each verse together. Beautiful.

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  14. AnonymousApril 7, 2013 at 8:53 PM

    This forms a perfect circle. Beautiful!

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