Thursday, April 4, 2013

Dusty Eggshells Shine..


Day 05 - Eggshells

 
 
Dusty Eggshells Shine
 

 
His bicycle skids
as the morning sun blinds him;
dusty eggshells shine
 
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Dusty eggshells shine;
she walks under the window
of her own kitchen…
 
 
RS:)

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12 comments:

  1. Sankara Jayanth SApril 4, 2013 at 11:49 AM

    hahaha!!!! wonderful, cheeky, witty! loved it!

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  2. PranitaApril 4, 2013 at 1:26 PM

    Readin this made me smile... :)

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  3. rallentandaApril 4, 2013 at 4:59 PM

    Made me smile too.

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  4. LollyApril 4, 2013 at 5:02 PM

    "the window of her own kitchen." Love this little bit of domesticity.

    Very nice haiku set.

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  5. AnonymousApril 4, 2013 at 6:00 PM

    I can just see those dusty eggshells!

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  6. PanchaliApril 4, 2013 at 9:10 PM

    Awesome...vivid imagery!Loved it!

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  7. UnknownApril 4, 2013 at 10:24 PM

    Really like the first one

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  8. NankaApril 5, 2013 at 3:28 AM

    Made me laugh out aloud!! Feels like I have witnessed those scenes myself!! RS :D

    Are you now able to open my blog and comment section RS!!

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 5, 2013 at 3:33 AM

      No, Nanka..but I am sure you received my comment...:)

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  9. Gemma WisemanApril 5, 2013 at 4:39 AM

    A fun major role for eggshells! Loved both haiku!

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  10. Woman'n'BeyondApril 5, 2013 at 7:07 AM

    wow! What a witty take on prompt!!

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  11. AnonymousApril 5, 2013 at 12:33 PM

    Simply creative and wonderful

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