April A2Z Heights -
Day 26
Prompt: Waterfall
Soothing Symphony
She
sits on the edge
of
a steaming waterfall;
I
click her photo
I click her photo
I click her photo
as
wet pearls land on her face;
sounds
of waterfall
Sounds of waterfall
Sounds of waterfall
and her bare feet splash water;
soothing
symphony
Soothing symphony;
Soothing symphony;
hopping
on the scattered rocks
I slowly
reach her
I slowly reach her;
I slowly reach her;
my
little one clicks us both
we sit on the edge..
RS:)
we sit on the edge..
RS:)
Aww! That's a really sweet haiku there! Nice one!!
ReplyDelete~Gaurang
Very beautifully written. It really is a soothing symphony! :)
ReplyDeleteThat seems a nice family vacation!! Very refreshing to take a break and what better place!! ;)
ReplyDeleteAnd your haiku is such a melody... Romantic and familial.. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThis is so rich it activates multiple senses loved it
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful love story amny levels deep.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery!
ReplyDeletebeautiful and tomantic.. and those wet peasrls are rea; beauty! wonderful, rameshji! :)
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If you'd like to read mine, here it is: Waterfalls.
Your words are a soothing symphony!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing...Its BEAUTIFUL.
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery and narration. 3rd verse is my favourite
ReplyDeleteromantic..
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a haiku story! love it
ReplyDeleteVery very nice...
ReplyDeleteThank you.
Siggi
Mr. Romance, that's your new name♥
ReplyDeletedeeply romantic with an unexpected end. LOVe THIS!!
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