Friday, April 12, 2013

She Holds a Lily..



Day 13

 
Prompt: Lily
 
 
She Holds a Lily
 
 
Soft and magical
layers wrapped together;
she holds a lily
 
 
She holds a lily
and he plucks it from her hand;
a wink of eyelash
 
 
A wink of eyelash,
her face turns a dark crimson;
colourful lilies
 
 
Colourful lilies
in the bouquet know it all;
gift of innocence
 
 
Gift of innocence
goes from his hands to her heart;
dark crimson turns pink
 
 
Dark crimson turns pink;
freshness of blooming lilies,
soft and magical..
 
 
RS:)

 
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18 comments:

  1. Sankara Jayanth SApril 12, 2013 at 11:40 AM

    one of the best romantic haiku i ever read from you..! i mean, its simply amazing.. *bows* beauty all over it, i am jumping. lilies! wonderful, sir! magical! I have no words for it, so i'll end with a bow again. *bow* Keep writing, I'll never want to stop reading haiku!!!!

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 12, 2013 at 11:44 AM

      Thanks Jayanth...your wonderful spirit and love for haiku adds to my own joy....keep visiting, and more so keep writing..

      RS

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  2. KISLAYA GOPALApril 12, 2013 at 12:11 PM

    One of the Best haiku, Ramesh Sir.
    What a poetic description of pure love, innocence and joy.
    A masterpiece!

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 12, 2013 at 7:55 PM

      Thanks a lot...It just happened and I am happy to know that you found it a masterpiece...Aren't you creating one everyday...

      RS

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  3. AnonymousApril 12, 2013 at 1:04 PM

    I love the changing colors! Beautiful.

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 12, 2013 at 7:57 PM

      Thanks...yes our feelings do give different hues to our faces...you got it well..hope you will keep visiting..

      RS

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  4. AnonymousApril 12, 2013 at 1:23 PM

    I like this very softy romantic haiku cascade.

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 12, 2013 at 7:58 PM

      Thanks...your enncouragement enhances...keep visiting please..

      RS

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  5. ClaudiaApril 12, 2013 at 3:43 PM

    Ramesh,
    It's so plesant to read your cascade of haiku! Beautiful!
    Claudia

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 12, 2013 at 7:59 PM

      It's my pleasure to see you visiting here Claudia..thanks a lot..

      RS

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  6. Siggi in Downeast MaineApril 12, 2013 at 5:49 PM

    Lovely quietly, softly romantic cascading set.
    Peace
    Siggi

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 12, 2013 at 8:00 PM

      SIDM..these words "lovely quietly, softly romantic...made me feel very calm and nice..thanks a lot...

      RS

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  7. Maggie GraceApril 12, 2013 at 10:51 PM

    A lovely and romantic cascade.

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 13, 2013 at 9:00 PM

      Thanks for the appreciation!! It encourages...

      RS

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  8. Amrit SinhaApril 13, 2013 at 4:35 AM

    I liked the feeling of innocent love cascading through your haiku ... brilliantly rendered Sir :-)

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 13, 2013 at 9:01 PM

      Thanks a lot Amrit!!! Your encouragement is a constant on this page..

      RS

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 13, 2013 at 10:52 AM

    This is quite the little exchange!

    In Her Arms a Lily

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