Sunday, April 14, 2013

I Miss Morning Mist..

April A2Z Heights -
Day 15


Prompt: Mist..

 
 
Bright sun of summer
quietly peeps through her window;
I miss morning mist

I miss morning mist;
no more scrawling of names
on the window’s glass

On the window’s glass;
she pulls a curtain to stop
bright sun of summer…


RS:)
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12 comments:

  1. rallentandaApril 14, 2013 at 2:44 PM

    I like the scrawling of names on the misted glass.Creative response to the prompt.

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  2. UnknownApril 14, 2013 at 4:26 PM

    Ramesh I have to agree with rallentanda, the set was serene, but the 2nd stands apart for me- lovely- thank you.

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  3. AnonymousApril 14, 2013 at 4:35 PM

    Very nice set. I can sense that longing for the morning mist.

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  4. AnonymousApril 14, 2013 at 5:14 PM

    No more scrawling of names... until the next morning mist! :)
    Shimmer

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  5. Maggie GraceApril 14, 2013 at 5:27 PM

    I am wondering why there is no morning mist? Makes me sad.

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  6. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 14, 2013 at 8:42 PM

    Missing morning mist, are you? Well, I'm sure there's a remedy!

    Morning Mist

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  7. NankaApril 15, 2013 at 4:51 AM

    RS you must visit the Blue Mountains and there you will find the blue mist rising up to your window glass even in summer!! :)

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  8. Uma AnandaneApril 15, 2013 at 8:13 AM

    Long time and I still see the beauty of your haikus :)

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  9. AnonymousApril 15, 2013 at 8:58 AM

    Amazing cascade, Ramesh

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  10. Gaurang RaoApril 15, 2013 at 9:52 AM

    Wonderfully written RS :)! It really reminds me of writing on cars and windows before!
    ~Gaurang

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  11. PranitaApril 15, 2013 at 11:03 PM

    So imaginative!!!!

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  12. AnonymousApril 16, 2013 at 8:50 PM

    so well done! I love the way the poem falls back on itself.

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