Tuesday, April 2, 2013

I Buy Red Candle.

Day 03 - Candle



 
I buy red candle
flame flickers deep yellow;
 shadow dances black
 

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shadow dances black,
 stubborn darkness stays around;
minds need candle light


 
 
RS:)

7 comments:

  1. indeed, sometimes it is surprising how a lit candle can ease our minds. and nice portrayal of the colors that accompany the surroundings. loved it. :)

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  2. hey...
    its nice to hear from you...
    I am an ardent fan of your writings...
    but over my excitement..I mishandled and the comment got deleted

    any way better luck next time

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  3. Very nice view.

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  4. Minds need candle light.. loved it

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  5. Candlelight is so soothing with its flickering shadows :)

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  6. Lovely words and may the deep yellow turn deeper RS!! It surely can drive away the unwilling obstinate away!!

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    1. OMG...And what a pleasure to find you here Nanka...oh, how much have I missed your haiku and of course your comments...THANKS FOR BEING BACK..

      RS

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