Saturday, April 27, 2013

She Shouts At Me Wild..



April A2Z Heights -
Day 28


 
She Shouts At Me Wild..
 
 
Happier summers;
all my paper boats dream of
tiny streams around

Tiny streams around,
as I leave water-tap open;
she shouts at me wild

She shouts at me wild;
each drop of water is gold
in her open palm

In her open palm,
she holds hope of lavish rains;
happier summer
 
 
RS:)

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Prompt: Liquid..
 
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11 comments:

  1. NankaApril 27, 2013 at 11:38 AM

    Save water and save paper too!! RS!! You may just be in for more shouts!! :)

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 27, 2013 at 11:43 AM

      Oh, Nanka..I have learnt all my lessons..

      RS

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    2. NankaApril 28, 2013 at 1:59 AM

      Behind every successful man there is a woman!! ;)

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  2. KISLAYA GOPALApril 27, 2013 at 11:59 AM

    This is really very exprssive and even in the shouts there is love hidden. Also better future happier world!
    Loved it! Each line of your haiku is Gold :)

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  3. AnonymousApril 27, 2013 at 1:16 PM

    I tell my boys to turn the water off and save some for the fish. Very nice.

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 27, 2013 at 5:06 PM

    Oh, the shouting! Ah, the wasted water! Oh, I understand!

    Awakening

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  5. AnonymousApril 27, 2013 at 6:01 PM

    You have touched upon a global problem -conservation of water - that we all need to shout about!!
    Sudden Sun

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  6. AnonymousApril 27, 2013 at 8:57 PM

    Raising to water issue. Good. Excellent.

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  7. KISLAYA GOPALApril 28, 2013 at 8:14 AM

    I have nominated you for liebster blog award. please see my blog, thanx :)

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  8. Harshad MehtaMay 4, 2013 at 9:00 PM

    Call of time!

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  9. Gillena CoxMay 5, 2013 at 5:41 PM

    absolutely love your haiku string; a fabulous response to the liquid prompt


    much love

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