Saturday, April 27, 2013

She Shouts At Me Wild..



April A2Z Heights -
Day 28


 
She Shouts At Me Wild..
 
 
Happier summers;
all my paper boats dream of
tiny streams around

Tiny streams around,
as I leave water-tap open;
she shouts at me wild

She shouts at me wild;
each drop of water is gold
in her open palm

In her open palm,
she holds hope of lavish rains;
happier summer
 
 
RS:)

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Prompt: Liquid..
 

11 comments:

  1. Save water and save paper too!! RS!! You may just be in for more shouts!! :)

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    1. Oh, Nanka..I have learnt all my lessons..

      RS

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    2. Behind every successful man there is a woman!! ;)

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  2. This is really very exprssive and even in the shouts there is love hidden. Also better future happier world!
    Loved it! Each line of your haiku is Gold :)

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  3. I tell my boys to turn the water off and save some for the fish. Very nice.

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  4. Oh, the shouting! Ah, the wasted water! Oh, I understand!

    Awakening

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  5. You have touched upon a global problem -conservation of water - that we all need to shout about!!
    Sudden Sun

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  6. Raising to water issue. Good. Excellent.

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  7. I have nominated you for liebster blog award. please see my blog, thanx :)

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  8. absolutely love your haiku string; a fabulous response to the liquid prompt


    much love

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