Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Stingless King..


Day 04 - Drone


 
 
Stingless King
 
 
Lucky he,
born to be a drone;
stingless king
 
stingless king;
she looks for the spine,
lends him her's..
 
 
RS:)
 
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16 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 3, 2013 at 8:41 PM

    stingless and gutless? :-) Nicely done Ramesh

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  2. Maggie GraceApril 3, 2013 at 8:42 PM

    Strangeness of bees caught in haiku.

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  3. ClaudiaApril 3, 2013 at 9:01 PM

    "Stingless king", I like the sound of that. :) Well done.

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  4. NankaApril 3, 2013 at 9:02 PM

    They make a happy couple RS!! ....And I'm back since the last prompt at HH :)

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  5. Sankara Jayanth SApril 3, 2013 at 9:17 PM

    Stingless king.! wonderful haiku, as always! :)

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  6. UnknownApril 3, 2013 at 10:27 PM

    Love it - perfection!!

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  7. LocomenteApril 4, 2013 at 12:22 AM

    Oh yes indeed...
    Lucky drone!!

    Loved it...

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  8. Amrit SinhaApril 4, 2013 at 12:53 AM

    A beautiful story ... well written Sir !!!

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  9. AnonymousApril 4, 2013 at 1:28 AM

    Ah, the life of the drone... fine till winter comes and they get evicted from the hive :(
    Nice haiku.

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  10. lishanaApril 4, 2013 at 2:36 AM

    Wow!!

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  11. Vaishali JainApril 4, 2013 at 3:54 AM

    I find it very interesting; the story the haiku seems to say. :)

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  12. AnonymousApril 4, 2013 at 7:30 AM

    Really enjoyed this

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  13. AnonymousApril 4, 2013 at 8:38 AM

    This is wonderful! Love that she loans him her spine.

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  14. joanneApril 4, 2013 at 10:51 AM

    I flashed on King Joffrey in Game of Thrones, tho, in that instance, it's his mother's spine he uses...

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  15. PanchaliApril 4, 2013 at 11:33 AM

    Oh, that last line was a treat, Ramesh! Fantastic...

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  16. AnonymousApril 4, 2013 at 11:49 AM

    You have told the whole 'love' story in two verses! Nicely done!

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