Wednesday, April 10, 2013

She Waters Jasmine


Day 11

Prompt: Jasmine

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She waters jasmine,
robust vine happily climbs;
I paint the wall bright

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I paint the wall bright;
each little flower thanks her
with a fragrant smile

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With a fragrant smile
she gifts me jasmine joy;
magical moments

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Magical moments;
sun knocks on the window,
she waters jasmine..




RS:)
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35 comments:

  1. Sankara Jayanth SApril 10, 2013 at 11:37 AM

    *bows* I loved it. I could see this before my eyes. Brilliant. I loved this one so much, Ramesh ji. Very much! :)
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    If you like to read mine, here it is: http://wp.me/p1QKRs-WH

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    1. Sankara Jayanth SApril 10, 2013 at 11:41 AM

      I just saw your comment on my blog sir. I already read this before you invited me. I always run to your blog first, I know it will help me calm down. As it did now. Thank you very much, Rameshji. :)

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  2. ʞɐApril 10, 2013 at 11:41 AM

    Wow. Superb.

    Beautifully penned. :)

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  3. AnonymousApril 10, 2013 at 11:55 AM

    Weaving jasmine into a chain - nicely done!

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  4. The Write GirlApril 10, 2013 at 8:19 PM

    You paint such a beautiful scene with this haiku. I enjoyed each line Ramesh.

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:04 AM

      Thanks Write Girl....You have always encouraged...me...hope you will keep visiting and keep enjoying..

      RS

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  5. UnknownApril 10, 2013 at 8:22 PM

    As is the jasmine on the vine you have beautifully woven your words Ramesh

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:06 AM

      And how beautifully you have weaved this compliment.. Thanks..

      RS

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  6. Maggie GraceApril 10, 2013 at 9:08 PM

    Lovely cascade for a beautiful flower.

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  7. AnonymousApril 10, 2013 at 10:12 PM

    You certainly paid an ode to jasmine flower.

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:10 AM

      I thought I paid an Ode to her.. but now I realise it can be other way round too.. thanks a lot.. ..

      RS

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  8. ClaudiaApril 10, 2013 at 10:13 PM

    That's beautiful. Very pleasant read. :)

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:10 AM

      Thanks a lot...I am happy to make you feel pleasant..

      RS

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  9. Siggi in Downeast MaineApril 10, 2013 at 10:33 PM

    Wonderful, wonderful...love it.
    Love the cascading verses.
    Peace
    Siggi

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:11 AM

      Thanks ..I can hear your compliments.. thanks a lot..

      RS

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  10. KISLAYA GOPALApril 11, 2013 at 12:37 AM

    Superbly written Haiku Ramesh Sir.
    What I like about your haiku is the repitition of lines and then some other emotion emerging from each successive haiku. :)
    Also Thanx for your encouragement on my blogpost.!

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:13 AM

      You are a kind soul...Kislaya...thanks a lot...keep writing..

      RS

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  11. Amrit SinhaApril 11, 2013 at 1:00 AM

    You paint magical words Sir ... really beautiful


    - Amrit Sinha

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:14 AM

      Thanks Amrit...I am so happy to know the name... as pious as the soul you carry..you are very nice..

      RS

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  12. NankaApril 11, 2013 at 1:03 AM

    A beautiful picture and pleasant to read RS!!

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:17 AM

      You are a constant inspiration Nanka.. so nice of you for being there..

      RS

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  13. AnonymousApril 11, 2013 at 1:40 AM

    I particularly liked 'each little flower thanks her

    with a fragrant smile' :)

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:19 AM

      Thanks a lot...I liked your 'like'...Keep visiting and encouraging..

      RS

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  14. LLM CallingApril 11, 2013 at 8:12 AM

    I really love the third one

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:20 AM

      You have spotted it so well....thanks for the pick...

      RS

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  15. AnonymousApril 11, 2013 at 8:33 AM

    The tenderness of the moments described in this poem settled into my soul! Lovely!

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:21 AM

      And your comment settled into my soul...Thanks a lot...

      RS

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  16. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:05 AM

    You know how to compliment with minimum words.. thanks..

    RS

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  17. PanchaliApril 11, 2013 at 11:20 AM

    I read your lovely pieces again...and again. Beautiful. Got your message from Kislaya. Thanks for the time..RS!

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2013 at 11:25 AM

      Aha, Kislaya is a kind soul... Thanks a lot Panchali...I visit your haiku everyday..but not able to comment...some technical issue...you will find me visiting your page through out...your feedback is enhancing,,

      RS

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  18. Priti LisaApril 12, 2013 at 12:57 PM

    So tender and magical a moment.
    Your poetry is supreme, truly♥

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  19. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 12, 2013 at 7:46 PM

    What's in the water, anyway? :)

    Notes of Gold

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