April A2Z Heights -
Day 19
Prompt : Qutub Minar
My dream to touch skies
falls from the Qutub Minar;
she catches it well;
She catches it well;
Thank God she had her feet kept
firmly on the ground
Firmly on the ground;
heights do not impress her,
I know I am short
I know I am short;
Qutub Minar stands real tall,
yet she prefers Taj
Yet she prefers Taj
in the pictures I have brought;
One day, yes, one day..
Yet she prefers Taj
in the pictures I have brought;
One day, yes, one day..
R.S.
She is really very caring,understanding and so loving too!! You must be one hell of a lucky man RS!! :)
ReplyDeleteYou bet Nanka...very lucky..indeed..touch wood..wish she could say the same..
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Haha :) RS :) You should visit them more often, and I just love the way you use the last line of one stanza as the starting line of the next!
ReplyDelete~Gaurang
Wow, You have created a masterpiece lik Taj itself! Very beautiful haiku!
ReplyDeleteBeatuiful and romantic.
ReplyDeleteNice. Great rhythm and flow.
ReplyDeleteA message there...
ReplyDeleteAnd a good compilation...
Nice one!
Truly Taj Mahal seems to be unmatchable.
ReplyDeleteWonderful take on the prompt
ReplyDeleteWonderful take on the prompt
ReplyDeleteThere is much to be said for a woman who has her feet firmly on the ground!! :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful cscade Ramesh
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