Thursday, April 18, 2013

Yet She Prefers Taj..



April A2Z Heights -
Day 19


Prompt : Qutub Minar
 
 
My dream to touch skies
 falls  from the Qutub Minar;
she catches it well;
 
She catches it well;
Thank God she had her feet kept
firmly on the ground
 
Firmly on the ground;
heights do not impress her,
I know I am short 
 
I know I am short;
Qutub Minar stands real tall,
yet she prefers Taj

Yet she prefers Taj
in the pictures I have brought;
One day, yes, one day..
 
 
R.S.

 

12 comments:

  1. She is really very caring,understanding and so loving too!! You must be one hell of a lucky man RS!! :)

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    1. You bet Nanka...very lucky..indeed..touch wood..wish she could say the same..

      RS

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  2. Haha :) RS :) You should visit them more often, and I just love the way you use the last line of one stanza as the starting line of the next!
    ~Gaurang

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  3. Wow, You have created a masterpiece lik Taj itself! Very beautiful haiku!

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  4. Beatuiful and romantic.

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  5. Nice. Great rhythm and flow.

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  6. A message there...
    And a good compilation...
    Nice one!

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  7. Truly Taj Mahal seems to be unmatchable.

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  8. Wonderful take on the prompt

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  9. Wonderful take on the prompt

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  10. There is much to be said for a woman who has her feet firmly on the ground!! :)

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