Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Not A Volcano...Haiku


April A2Z Heights -
Day 25

Prompt: Volcano
 
 
Ah, a real cool heart,
she never erupts ever;
not a volcano
 
 
Not a volcano;
a quiet river of love flows
uninterrupted
 
 
RS:)
 

16 comments:

  1. You've given a beautiful twist to such a horrendous word!!

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  2. "Not a volcano" is a good thing to be. What a nice thought in poetry.

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  3. my love is no volcano either...nicely said..

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  4. Lovely ode to a calm loving person!

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  5. What a beautiful heart you describe here Ramesh. Simply stunning!

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  6. The one you love, as you describe her again and again, must be simply amazing!

    Volcano

    MMT’s Blog Featured at Poets United

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  7. RS!! did you know that the molten lava flows underground for a distance over a long period of time before it decides to erupt and come to the surface!! Could be a dormant volcano!! :)

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    1. Ha, ha....Nanka....I salute your fantastic sense of humour..you made my day...

      RS

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  8. Beautiful description of her :)

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  9. what a serene heart she has. wonderful haiku, rameshji :)
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    Here is mine, if ypu'd like to read: Volcano.

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  10. Cool volcano haiku. They always remind me of Hawaii:)

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  11. Very nice...but watch out...when the pressure builds...and needs a way out...don't be in the way ☺
    Peace
    Siggi

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