Monday, April 8, 2013

Happy Greens: Haiku



 
Day 09
HUNTER

 
 
 
King lion goes
hunting for the sheep;
happy greens 
 
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Jungle of my thoughts
as I hunt for negatives;
dark images grow
 
 
**
 
Ah, I fear
nurturing talent;
hunters all 
 
 
RS:)
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11 comments:

  1. NankaApril 8, 2013 at 11:48 AM

    You always manage delightful Haiku no matter what the topic is!! :)

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 8, 2013 at 11:50 AM

      Thanks Nanka.. Read your haiku..Hunterwali looked nice.. cant get to comment your blog..because it is Discusq or something.

      RS

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  2. Sankara Jayanth SApril 8, 2013 at 1:05 PM

    "hunters all" - true.. wonderful haiku..and loved the second one most! :)
    When the hunter becomes hunted

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  3. AnonymousApril 8, 2013 at 1:34 PM

    "Jungle of my thoughts" Nice depth in this one.

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  4. UnknownApril 8, 2013 at 2:32 PM

    I just love the second one! such a suggestive, strong, motional state of mind and soul captured there!

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  5. The Write GirlApril 8, 2013 at 5:58 PM

    I love each haiku especially this line "jungle of my thoughts." Breathtaking verses!

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  6. LocomenteApril 8, 2013 at 9:51 PM

    2nd Haiku is marvelous

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  7. PanchaliApril 8, 2013 at 11:23 PM

    Wow...I just love the second one--'jungle of my thoughts'!
    Brilliant!!

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  8. UnknownApril 9, 2013 at 1:56 AM

    strong set peak in the middle i think

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 9, 2013 at 4:53 AM

    In that jungle of your thoughts, perhaps you can hunt for just the right image!

    Hunter

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  10. kalpana solsiApril 10, 2013 at 10:59 AM

    Jungle of my thoughts, as i hunt for negatives, dark images grow. Very beautiful.

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