Tuesday, April 16, 2013

An Owl Outside Hoots: Haiku..

April A2Z Heights -
Day 17


Prompt : Owl

 
I confess to her,
"Never seen an owl, you know?"
Mirror behind laughs ..
 
 
Mirror behind laughs,
I turn to look back, angry;
An owl outside hoots
 
 
RS:)
 
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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 16, 2013 at 5:20 PM

    I have never seen an owl in the wild! I would love to one day(or night)

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  2. The Write GirlApril 16, 2013 at 5:43 PM

    I think of an old fairy tale as I read this "Mirror, mirror on the wall." Nicely written Ramesh.

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  3. ekta khetanApril 16, 2013 at 9:58 PM

    Interesting take on owl, all in all in a haiku!

    I too have to write on the theme....struggling on building the nature part of haiku in it.

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  4. PranitaApril 16, 2013 at 10:47 PM

    Hats off to your imagination.... you always come up with something really different!

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  5. LocomenteApril 17, 2013 at 3:19 AM

    In the last line... Did u mean to type "owl"?
    Anyways... Nice thot there...
    Outstanding imagination

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 17, 2013 at 3:56 AM

      Oh, thanks.. You caught me...I have corrected..

      RS

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  6. KISLAYA GOPALApril 17, 2013 at 3:34 AM

    Wow, You always create magic with the haiku prompt!
    Good one, loved it :)

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  7. AnonymousApril 17, 2013 at 8:51 AM

    Very nicely done

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  8. Amrit SinhaApril 17, 2013 at 11:08 AM

    An amazing story ... enjoyed it Sir :-)

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  9. AnonymousApril 17, 2013 at 1:35 PM

    Great story with a twist x loved it!

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