Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 9 – February 9th – Theme: Paint the Image
Photo Clicked by Siva of: Siva's Art Work
Photo Clicked by Siva of: Siva's Art Work
Key to success;
myriad locks confuse
and life stays closed..
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Get broken, go
missing, with nothing amiss;
Colourful locks..
colourful locks;
very tempting to put
one on my mouth..
RS :)
Love your 3 haiku! They go from wise to playful. Very creative!
ReplyDeleteJust be careful not to swallow them ~
ReplyDeleteNice triple set ~
Phew! I like the idea of the third one!! (only joking!)
ReplyDeleteThat last one is so clever! Great haiku!
ReplyDeleteRamesh -- you are very creative and clever!! Well done!
ReplyDeleteLike how they went from serious to fun...great haiku!!
ReplyDeleteInteresting how you went from serious to playful! Love it.
ReplyDeleteMost of your haiku have a fun element in them. That's really cool! I liked this triplet. :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed!
ReplyDeleteNice set of haiku. The strength grows from one to three, I like the third the most ... but please ... don't hang that lock on your lips, because you write such nice haiku. It would be a loss for the world.
ReplyDeleteHey, if you can't open the lock, you might as well eat it, right? :)
ReplyDeletePaint This Image in Your Heart
A great trio!
ReplyDeleteAll of them are miraculous ! :)
ReplyDeleteHmmm - padlock the words which shouldn't be spoken. Good idea for me! Good trio.
ReplyDeletevery playful and beautiful.
ReplyDelete'tempt to put one on my mouth' Loved it Rameshji..
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special