Saturday, February 25, 2012

Footfalls of Spring..

Written for Haiku Heights:  SPRING
Thanks to Priyanka of  "Priyanka's World" blog for the prompt

 
 

I bring this haiku from my post written for  Challenge by SiS...
to honour Leo's comments on that post..

Footfalls of spring
merge with songs of birds;
winter’s last blush

adding a new here:

Winter's last blush;
ah, playful happy spring's 
soft naughty nudge  


RS:)
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13 comments:

  1. Tarang SinhaFebruary 25, 2012 at 7:26 AM

    Really nice. I liked "Winter's last blush".

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  2. anthonynorthFebruary 25, 2012 at 7:39 AM

    Excellently done.

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  3. Mariya KolevaFebruary 25, 2012 at 7:47 AM

    Wow, it's amazing... I love the second one. It's so "softly naughty"
    Greetings, M.

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  4. GraceFebruary 25, 2012 at 8:47 AM

    I like winter's last blush as well ~

    I want to thank you for showing me the way to haiku linking up one verse to another ~ Its fun to do it :-)

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  5. KarenFebruary 25, 2012 at 9:00 AM

    Oh, both are terrific. I like the flow from one to the next!

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  6. MarieFebruary 25, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    Your second course is a very tasty haiku.

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  7. Someone is SpecialFebruary 25, 2012 at 10:52 AM

    'Winter's last blush' ~ Loved the haiku so much Rameshji.. :-)

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  8. Judith WesterfieldFebruary 25, 2012 at 1:37 PM

    Soft naughty nudge -- that's a line I wish I thought of which is my highest compliment!

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  9. Siggi in Downeast MaineFebruary 25, 2012 at 3:57 PM

    I'm with Judith and "soft naughty nudge"...grrreat !
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  10. N.S.KirtiFebruary 25, 2012 at 9:47 PM

    I am finding this way of linking two Haikus so amazing!
    and your haiku has such a pleasant,playful association with the seasons :)
    "winter's last blush" this is so beautiful Ramesh Ji :)

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  11. Vinay Leo R.March 1, 2012 at 9:07 AM

    Ah Rameshji, that haiku is a memorable one, and I still find it stands better on its own, even without the new one, though that is also good! :)

    Winter's last blush is indeed a good imagery. :)

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  12. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 2, 2012 at 7:45 AM

    I'm ready for that "naughty nudge," because we're still shivering here in the Desert Southwest, USA!


    Waiting for Springtime

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  13. NehaMarch 3, 2012 at 8:49 AM

    Loved the line "winter's last blush"... Now spring's summer is getting too hot, I wish winter could blush again.

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