Saturday, February 18, 2012

SEASON OF SHARING..

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 -
Day 19 – February 19th –
Theme: Seasons Type: Kigo


ALSO SHARED WITH OSI ..PROMPT: ELEMENTAL
thanks to Pam for the prompt..


SEASON OF SHARING..


Season of sharing
secrets with the flowers;
happy butterflies

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happy butterflies
find their hearts dancing;
footfalls of spring

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footfalls of spring
merge with songs of birds;
winter’s last blush

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Winter’s last blush;
at her  elemental best
nature's glimpse of joy

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Nature's glimpse of joy
that lies a little ahead;
a hopeful heart

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A hopeful heart
blooms with happier dreams;
season of sharing

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Season of sharing
secrets with the flowers;
happy butterflies…

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RS :)


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18 comments:

  1. Vinay Leo R.February 18, 2012 at 11:17 AM

    I like this one best, Rameshji:

    footfalls of spring
    merge with songs of birds;
    winter’s last blush

    it speaks everything said by the other haiku in your chain... hence I find it most powerful.

    All are beautifully conceived though. Cheers!

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  2. Maude LynnFebruary 18, 2012 at 11:28 AM

    "A hopeful heart
    blooms with happier dreams;
    season of sharing"

    That's really lovely!

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  3. Someone is SpecialFebruary 18, 2012 at 12:03 PM

    Indeed Happy Rameshji.. Loved your take on the prompt!

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 18, 2012 at 4:04 PM

    Lovely series of haiku, nicely done on the prompt. Loved reading these.

    Namaste

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  5. AmberFebruary 18, 2012 at 11:04 PM

    This is so cute and joyful. Loved it! :)

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  6. Harshad MehtaFebruary 18, 2012 at 11:48 PM

    I love " Secrets with flowers, happy butterflies"
    Just beautiful.

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2012 at 1:32 AM

    Absolutely gorgeous - I love the way your chain is forged, each haiku linked to the next, such a natural progression.

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  8. AsniFebruary 19, 2012 at 1:47 AM

    Leaves one feeling joyful after reading this set of haiku.

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  9. anthonynorthFebruary 19, 2012 at 1:51 AM

    Haiku to give a warm glow. Lovely.

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  10. Sri ValliFebruary 19, 2012 at 2:54 AM

    "Season of sharing
    secrets with the flowers;
    happy butterflies"

    How beautiful!!.....great thoughts...Lovely haiku :)
    Seasons~Avatars of Mother Nature

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  11. Magical Mystical TeacherFebruary 19, 2012 at 5:35 AM

    I like how one element leads into the other, just as the seasons do.

    Winter

    Would you please consider turning off Blogger's word verification? It is very annoying, not to mention difficult to read. Thank you.

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  12. ElleceeFebruary 19, 2012 at 6:22 AM

    My favourite - but the chain is special

    "Nature's glimpse of joy
    that lies a little ahead;
    a hopeful heart"

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  13. Judith WesterfieldFebruary 19, 2012 at 6:31 AM

    You are love.

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  14. Ramesh SoodFebruary 19, 2012 at 8:26 AM

    Thanks Jim and MMT, for the feedback..I have removed the word verification..it won't annoy you anymore.. RS :)

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  15. becca givensFebruary 19, 2012 at 8:28 AM

    Ramesh - you have a gift for this style of writing. Blessings for the joy you spread! :)

    Day 19)

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  16. gmaFebruary 19, 2012 at 9:18 AM

    wonderful poetic progression.

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  17. Terri / CloakedMonkFebruary 19, 2012 at 11:37 AM

    What a nice journey.

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  18. Andy SewinaFebruary 19, 2012 at 12:39 PM

    footfalls of spring
    merge with songs of birds;
    winter’s last blush

    The above is loaded and speaks volumes!!
    Also, I adore the thought - happy butterflies!

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